Alright, so then I'm late and its only the second chapter. >< Yeah, I ticked off with myself about that. But it is not the only thing that I'm late on. Anyway, apparently I'm so accustom to my weekend schedule that poor planning ended up ruining everything that I was planning to do. I've got new things happening on the weekend now, specifically my writing day. So yeah, it makes it difficult. But I figured that I'd be fine anyway. Which was certainly not the case.
Well I'm starting to get the rhythm down for this. It is so short, compared to what I have written, that it is a little weird for me. But I think it will take a couple more chapters for me to really start feeling it solidly. In the meantime I've got to work on further development since I've only got a good eight chapters solidly decided at this point. Which will only last me eight weeks and well I'm on 2 now. So I need to get busy. Anyway, it should be coming together the more I write I figure.
This chapter was more prologue in a manner of speaking. I am still working to set down the ground work for the primary characters so I am placing in character development points whenever I can since I have a fairly expansive background on the characters. Which is the other thing that is making development hard. I have a lot of characters and I have to make things for all of them. Fortunately, for villains I don't have to get insanely complicated just yet with them since they will be used as devices themselves to explain things about what makes this special and Shonen Jump.
I'm still working on finding my amount of comedy to mix in with this. I know that these usually swing widely from action to comedy, but I don't want it to be stupid, completely at least. I still don't really have a comedic relief character apart from the main character which will probably break things up frequently with his carefree oblivious attitude that'll get him trouble. Besides in two chapters things are going to start heating up and the flood gates will open on what makes things special. So that is when the real fun begins. I'm quite excited to get to that.