The Reborn Planet.

[Ulteka Mako]

Ok this just came to me. This going to be in the year 2020. The planet earth was destroyed. Alliens left a ship behind on earth during the stone age. 14 people made it off Earth on the ship.

We were sent to a planet were the Alliens use to live. They Alliens that had lived on this planet have moved on to another. We are able to remake are planet. We have a chance not to destroy it with wast and deadly gases.

Right now we are in the middle of remaking are planet. We are bulding a city called Nytram. Like I said... Only 14 people made it off Earth. I am the leader of the whole planet we are on.

I need your description.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Hieght:
Wieght:
Weapon(s):
Hair:
Clothing:
Bio:
Others:

Here is mine.

Name: Mako Nytram
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Hieght: 6'9"
Wieght: 340 lb (All muscel)
Weapon(s): One big silver sword, with flames going down the blade. It is unbreakable. A Ak-47.. It is no longer made.
Hair: Long/black
Clothing: A white cloak, and black and red pants. He has a white tank top with black flames under his cloak.
Bio: Is the leader of the new found planet. He was one of the survivers of planet earth. He was also one of the top ranking soldier in the world when earth was around.
Others: He has a black and red bandana on his head. He had all black combat boots. He has a gold whatch. His right arm can transform into a hyper beam gun.

Now this is going to be a good RP. I want aleast 3 paragraphs in each post. I am going to need five soilders, three doctors, two body gaurds, and four scientest.

If you want you can be an Allien on the other planet they went on. Their planet is called Nyphen. They visit every 3 years, and help us when ever we have war with someone.

Hope you have fun.

[gfmaster9999]

[Sounds fun.....I'am in


Name:Foxhound aka Fox
Gender:Male
Age:36
Hieght:6'2"
Wieght:222 lbs
Weapon(s):2 colt 45's A standard 1990's Army issue M16 equiped with bayonet( a knife that attaches to the end of a gun) a psg1 sniper rifel which he does not cary with him unless he is on a sniping mission and survival knife.
Hair:Black hair comed back with an all black bandana tied around it.
Clothing:A black Sneaking suit 1990's army gear over the top... If he takes the gear he is ready to engage in any mission.
Bio:Foxhound has a real name but he refueses to tell it to any one. He believes that it was the human races fault that the planet was destroied and he has lost faith in all people.He also does not believe in new hiteck weapons and skicks with his 1990's issued gear He was a high ranking soldier in a top secret government group known as the Renagade 6. He is an Expert in hand to hand combad including Boxing and Karate. Basicly Renagade 6 was the best silent soldier's in america and possibly the world... The group was so top secret that the president didn't even know they exsisted. He is Makos highest ranking officer.
Others:He has an eyepatch on his left eye, It suprisingly brings up his accuracy with his psg1 sniper rifel.

[Ulteka Mako]

You are in.. I had a feeling you would be my first member to join this rp.

Now all we need is 13 more people. After we get 3 more people we will start the rp.

I'm in ^_^

Name: Sable Luk (Pronounced like 'luck')
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6
Weight: 132lbs.
Weapon(s): A long sword, quite light, with 'Luk' engraved on it. From the handle to half way down the blade there are swirls and various shapes.
Hair: Straight brown hair just above the shoulder with natural blonde streaks. Pushed back by a black alice band.
Clothing: Black jeans, white top, black boots and tight leather jacket when not working. Black trousers white shirt and flat shoes when working.
Bio: Sable had been attending med school and was almost a fully trained doctor when the world when the earth was destroyed, luckily her friend knew about the ship and took her along with him as he knew that she would come in handy with her skills.
Other: Sable doesn't talk much especially around knew people.

[Ace_striker]

im in

Name:Arion
Age:22
Gender : Male
Weight:154lbs
Height:6'2
Hair:blonde hair spiked up
Clothes:black tank top with camoflouge baggy pants with combat boots and dog tags on neck.
Weapons:A red colored blade with a pheonix image ingraved.A shield that goes with it same color and image.
Bio:Was training in the army when earth was destroyed and knew a man who took him on a space ship with 13 other people.He was the mans personal weapon disigner for a while.

is this good or do i need to edit ? GTG.( Like this ? )

[Ulteka Mako]

Ok Ace you need to tell what your job is in this new planet. Like are you a soldier for me are something. You can't be my top rank soldier. It was Tanken by GFMaster.

Onther thing everyone, you need to ad gender to you description. That was my bad. I didn't put it on the discription layout. I will fix it. We need one more person and we can start. Then people can just jion from there. After you two do that, you can join.

[Ace_striker]

so am i in??

[Ulteka Mako]

Put your gender up under your age. And you are in after that. They goes for everyone... Put your gender under your age. It will be less confusing to people.

[Ace_striker]

Thanks

[Ulteka Mako]

Hey Ace... I have an important part for you. If you want it, I will give it to you. You can not make any mistakes with this job. It is a weapon desighner. You can still be a kickass fighter, and stuff, but I need someone to do this job for me. I didn't post it up thier because there is only 14 people on this planet.

You need to list that you have been a weapon maker forever how long you want to say in your bio. You also need to put that you are my weapon maker in your bio.

Ok? Will you accept the job?

[Ace_striker]

sure but what u mean by mistakes oh and dont worry bout bio .

[Ulteka Mako]

You have to make sure that people can undrstand like what weapon you are making. What it is for, and what it does.

Try not to make that many typos. And remeber you have to atleast have three paragraphs.