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[Zell]

I'm waiting for lolosky and malevolence to post before I post again today but, if they don't post by tommorrow then I will post again. I won't be here this weekend I am using a school computer. My computer doesn't work yet.

[Malevolence]

I've been really busy with work lately, dunno about Lolz though.

I'll try to post later.

This has been proof I'm still alive, but I'll be back....eh later.

[lolosky]

Ok, i have pneumonia and wasn't able to post at all last week.

So I'll start now, but I want to make one thing clear, Zell's character and my character are completely in conflict if you see he specifies that he is the "General and Commander of the Despiradi army" which is completely illogic since in my bio, which was done first, gives the title of "Great General of the High Order, Overlord of the Desperadi Red Army" to L'S' father, and after him L'S who is the leader of the Crimson Generals, the highest ranks of the Despiradi army, so i don't see how your character is the greatest warrior in the entire Despiradi army. Sorry for creating this controversy, but i started the Despiradi background from where Forsalen left it, and you just changed it a bit, so i'm going to ignore your character completely, and your previous post in the RP, not because i want to be rude, but because i consider you didn't paid any attention into my character, so I'm going to post Despiradi from the point of view i had been using, in which the king is ill, and the current regent is Xilas Swingestein, whom is also in control of the Flame Demons that Despiradi holds as last resort. So in this plot line I'm gonna post my character. Sorry if it contradicts you completely but i got here first =P

[Zell]

My bad lolosky I didn't really read your bio. I thought you meant you were a lesser general. I will change my character. Sorry man

Well it's good to see you lolosky. I'm posting in here just so you guys know I'm not dead at the moment. I can't post now because I'm sort of rushed for time but when break comes around I think I can manage =P. By the way, I like your character lolosky, he's interesting. The only thing I sort of have a problem with is you using the minus symbol instead of quotations... it's kind of hard to know when one character is talking or responding etc. Other than that it's great.

[lolosky]

Ok, i'm gonna change to bolds then, but i'm still keeping the minus symbols. See that's what i meant by not being evil just for the sake of evil, there must be some agenda, plots within plots and shit like that. Also i would hate to see that all of Despiradi people are just bloodlusters without anyother thought than just cutting heads off.

[Malevolence]

Originally Posted by lolosky

Ok, i'm gonna change to bolds then, but i'm still keeping the minus symbols. See that's what i meant by not being evil just for the sake of evil, there must be some agenda, plots within plots and shit like that. Also i would hate to see that all of Despiradi people are just bloodlusters without anyother thought than just cutting heads off.

Actually, as you'll see in an OOC message in my most recent post, you should use quotation marks ("dialogue"), as dashes are basically only used in foreing language school textbooks.

[lolosky]

I'm foreign so i guess that's my excuse

I'm going for it as my favorite author uses them in his books and i find it quite a way to express thoughts and ideas inside of actions and the movement of the plotline. And if the mods don't like it they can................ inform me

[Malevolence]

Well, the bold helps, though i cant always tell who's taking (that's the main problem).

So, since it was almost 3 pages in Word, I'm gonna summarize the important part of my post here (but read it anyway, it contians background stuff). So, as L's had said, Despiradi is going to attack Terravor with almost 1000 troops. I basically just got control of the tactics of the Despiradi side of that, also knowing there will be 400 archers, 400 soldiers, a wing of about 75 Dragonriders, 25 Behemoths, and a few divisions of siege engines (that''s a lot fo shit right there). We haven't done much yet, but Arqu is about to be crushed majorly at Dren Pass (where we all basically are right now), but Terravor could be a different story. In all likelihood, I'm sorry to say for Arqu, Despiradi will probably get Terravor, but stop to regroup, rearm, and recieve reinforcements there.

[lolosky]

I don't think terravor will fall that easily, although Dren Pass might be actuall into control i think Terravor will be the center of the first major battles among Arqu and Despiradi superior warriors (duh, us). But i can inform you already, i hardly doubt that L'S shows up in Terravor, not as thing are coming right now.

Come on Arqu people, we're waiting to crush your bones. reply at once

Yes, I was thinking something along those lines. I'll discuss some further plot details with you on AIM (assuming I can get it working again that is). If it does work, you guys can IM me at thevoid1724.

[Zell]

How do you get to MSWord? I have never been there

[lolosky]

Dude MSWord, is the program Microsoft Word, the one that comes with the microsoft office package, if you don't own it, you could also use OpenOffice for the spelling check, and length of the posts which is recommended to be half of a letter or A4 page, how long have you been using your comp pal?. any other kind of these questions PM me

[Zell]

Thanks man that helped alot. I won't be here for the next two weeks sorry.

[Atma-Noah]

Just trying to clear something up. Are the trolls in the town too? I know they attacked the Despiradi camp but are the in town too.