After the Rainfall- A Soldier Rp

I have a gun in mind for Mako Gun Sciences.

Its called The Hell Stormer

It’s a gun about the size of a AK-47 with a way bigger gun barrel. It is FULL BLACK except for the back of the gun which is RED. Heres a PIC.

http://img51.exs.cx/img51/1701/Hellstormer.png

It can shoot Flaming Bullets or Mako Frag Grenades or it can be used as a Flame Thrower too. It takes one min to reload the 6 Mako Frag Grenades. You can use the Flame Thrower for 10 seconds the it takes 20 seconds to be used again. It has unlimited Flaming Bullets.

Well what do you think let me know..

[HeavensCoin]

The only thing we are accepting is the doctor, so if you don't like it, you can't be in, I'm real sorry hun. Another thing, you can't use the tetsusaiga because it is from the seprate anime 'Inuyasha'. If you wanted to use someone else's weapon, I could be LIKE it, but not exactly. If you use it, It leads people to think you arn't very creative.

Lots of miss spelled words. Do you have Microsoft word, or Word perfect? Just run your post through there to make sure you've got everything spelled right.

And on your writting sample, the first paragraph was the same as the one in the apperance section. >.< That REALLY annoys me. That and the fact that the last half has no spacing between paragraphs and It is really hard to read. Fix it, and Rayne, Mk, and myself will review it. Remember, you only get one chance to fix it, so do it right!

Sincerely,
*~-Coins-~*

All right I will just read then. I do not care for (over reactive) RPs. This forum is just like the Zelda Power Forums where the Mods are on edge and everyone who thinks they are of any formal power they abuse it on the others who show unappealing acts.

So basic terms most people are two faced and do not care for the posters of any kind. Now next thing anyone is going to say is that I am just being the (over reactive) one but I am not. Most of you are the same and without any pity, all of you need to open up a little...

ok, i haven't been on in a while, and so i've missed out on this board, and all the stuff that's been going on in it... I personally, like your profile, he does seem a lil too gushy, there are guys out there like that, but most like girls for the same thing. (large cup size, small waist, average hips) so your character was a little different, and Coins' right, the tetsaiga is off limits *everyone bows to inuyasha and his skill* c'mon! somewhere out there, a guy took a lot of time to make that weapon, and it should be HIS!

I thought your lil story was very cute, and I liked how he was in fifth rank. It shows you're not stuck on yourself! (yay!) umm...however, the mispelled words...ain't happenin'...

The fact of the matter is, we're only taking the doctor... now you could change up your character a teensy bit and it would be doctor material, (you don't have to dress in scrubs to work at a hospital in the FF7 world) and we'd really like to have you.

As for that whole two para's about how we're all superficial... *sniffles* that was hurtful and uncalled for...just cause you're mad at coins don't mean you gots to take it out on the rest of us... ('sides! i lubs da coins!! *huggles her friend*)


Love much, (PDA PDA!!),
Rayne

P.S. if you still wanna be in the Rp, you can get in late, i'll even help on your profile if you want, see, i'm helpful that way *nods*

[Kyreaan]

Doctor hmm? Ok, how bout this?


Favorite Quote: "Oh, not so much of a badass now are we? What? No biting, witfull commitary? Oh...that's right...I just painted the wall with your guts."
Name: Dr. Fever
Real Name: ?
Age: 22
H: 5'11"
W: 180lb
Hair/eyes: Shaggy white hair/ Hazel eyes
Rank: 2
Specialty: Med. Docter/ Gun Expert

Weaponry: Dr. Fever prefers using only the dual pistols, 'Heaven and Hell'. Since he obtained Head Doctor status, he usually keeps them, along with the ammo and his gun collection, in a bunker under his office. Whenever he has to venture out, he's often seen carrying them low on his hips.
O/D Materia?: Only the Enemy Skill, which he keeps in the left shoulder piece of his Armor. He has five skills/spells: Matra Missle Lv.5, Chicobo Breeze, Beta, 1000 Needles, Bio Mass.

Limit Break: Boogle.
Because he split his time to both the Med. field and as an Op., the weird but bright Dr. Fever only developed one Limit Break, Boogle. Dr. Fever raises his arms into the air while screaming. His white doctor's coat twists around and covers his body. He then transforms into Boogle, a 70' tall Moogle with a bad temper. One of two things will happen. One, he will choose one opponent and shoot eye beams at it, turning it into a giant pork chop. He will then eat that opponent. Or two, if the enemy is too strong for the first, he will simply jump into the air and sit on all opponents for mod.-mega damage. He then shifts back to normal.

Phobia: None
Body Marks: Scars that cover his back. A remembrance of his childhood, in which he never talks about.

App: Handsome 22 year old, with white hair and hazel green eyes. Looks similiar in face structure and build to Squall in FF8. Is always seen wearing a white doctor's coat over his uniform. Also wears black-frame glasses.

Personality?: Dr. Fever is rarely reserved. He's a blabber mouth, and even more rarely does he use tact. He has a very cynical sense of humor and outlook on life.

Bio: Dr. Fever, his real name, and his past are all a mystery. Even ShinRa does not know who he really his. In truth, Dr. Fever isn't human. He is a mog who was tortured long ago by a mad scientist. The long experiments eventually, and accendently, lead into shapeshifting and unusual abilities. Once he became strong enough, he wrecked and torn down the lab, sending the mad scientist running. The mog never saw him again. Eventually, he masqueraded himself as a human male, working his way up through ShinRa ranks. On the field, he became a gun expert, but mostly for defensive reasons. However, now as a doctor for ShinRa, he secretly fights against experimentations and the cruelty against innocent creatures. He is brash, tactless, and often mean, but only to hide his true and kind nature.

Writing sample:
http://boards.stratics.com/php-bin/n...ard=nwntankard

The name of the thread is call 'The Druid's Challenge'. My handle is the same as on here. It's based on the game, Neverwinter Nights.

Oh WOW!! ok, you have a lot of similarities between this chara and your SOLDIER rp one, but since we've been looking for this chara for such a long time, I think It'd prolly be fine, we just have to get Coins opinion (and she's a softy at heart ^.^ *glomps da coins*)

Your quote was hilarious...and gruesome, and I like how his overdrive and background sorta coincide, it was all cute...i mean MANLY!! *cough* so, i give you the get go, all we have to do is wait for Coins ^_^!!

Love much, (PDA!!)
Rayne

[Kyreaan]

Well, those two chara's are actually based on one chara I played in a Rifts game. He didn't use a katana but rather a ninja-to and dual pistols. I can change a few things to make them 'more apart', no prob. Just read again for the changes, and we'll see what Coins think.

[Quistis]

i think he's alright? lol yeah? We need a doctor especially in the current stage of our RP. lol. But still, we need Coins opinion I know.

[HeavensCoin]

Awww....You guys are so sweet, waiting for my opinon like that! ^.^

Of course! I like his character, he's sexy! ^.^ He's got the whole 'White-haired-bishie' look going on, with Emo glasses! Muhahahahaha! Your writing styles are great, you really seem to know what your doing.

Plus, we just REALLY need a doctor, and your's has a cool name! Dr. Fever? Where did you come up with that?

Anyways, we're glad to have you on the team. Remember, just because your a doctor doesn't mean you have to sit in your office all day! Feel free to start Rping whenever. But keep in mind that the girls are coming in for their physicals, so you've got to be there.

Sincerely,
*~-Coins-~*

[Zero G]

Ok guys, This is just a quick message to say I wouldn't be very active at all over the next couple of weeks. I'm off to uni on friday, into my room on sunday which doesn't even have at telephone line and the course starts on Monday morning. So Busy busy busy. I will ask for a phone line in my room but it wouldn't be put in until at least the second week. Oh, and within the next couple of hours, I must unplug my computer.

So the only access will be limited to computers in the "Learning resource centre" i.e. library at uni until a phone line is connected. Not only will this inconvenience me but it will probably mean someone will have to take control of Kris while I'm gone. So yeah, Hopefully I'll beable to post occasionally before I go on my brother's computer but I doubt he'll let me on. Anyways, enjoy the rest fo the RP and I will try to post as soon as I can.