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Old 09-09-2004, 09:12 PM Level: 68   HP: 1678 / 1678
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I am currrently writing up the things for the RP to get it into motion. But I am in the period of my finals. So I am not able to place the time I need into it. I am planning on having it up and ready in two weeks. Which is the end of finals for me. I know it sounds strange finals now, but I am on quarters. So be ready for it then, it will be up shortly after my finals are completed.
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Dammit, I prolly won't be able to actually join in when this starts...I'm not allowed online at home anymore, so it would be a tiresome process to somehow print or save the thread, bring it home and type my post, then come back and post it from school...very tedious, and I doubt I would be able to keep up if it's really active. Sorry Andro. I was really looking forward to this, too. =/ Unless by some miracle I manage to get the modem back..I dobut it, although I'm doing the best I can here.

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Old 09-23-2004, 11:27 AM Level: 68   HP: 1678 / 1678
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I see and I was going to be starting the RP up in the next day or two with my finals in the last day. I can start focusing all my creative energies into this. Dragonheart you sure that you won't be able to? Only being 3 people is hardly much of a RP. We need you as part of the RP if possible. I don't know how active it shall be that it would become a hassle.

And what happened that caused these events to happen, out of curiosity.
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Old 09-23-2004, 11:33 AM Level: 60   HP: 1071 / 1492
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After I get home from school today, I'll take time to read over everything, and create a character. As I've had motivation to write lately and I want to start writing again. So that's what I'm going to do. I will try my best to write up to my potential.

Edit: Alright, I read through all of the information. I shall choose a Wolten character, also in the 8th year of apprenticeship.
I'll work out the character biography tonight, and post it tomorrow first thing after I get home from my dentist appointment.
I know my record in RPs is fairly bad, but that was in the past when I was more into gaming and RO and laziness. As you know, I've quit RO, and therefore have a lot of time on my hands, aside from college, and my new job.
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Name: Celerina Zeki
Gender: Female
Race: Wolten
Apprenticeship: 8th year
Appearance: Long dark grey hair going down to her midback. Her fur would bother her in the heat of the day, so she shaved it off to cool herself down. The only trait of her Wolten pride are her pointy ears and her eyes that shine a magnificent blue. Her legs are built strong, so she is very agile, and her intelligence is top notch. During her years in the Magic School, she had befriended a few people.
Background: Her family was one of the proudest Wolten clans in existence. When they saw her human-like one day, without any fur, they immediately scolded her betrayal and punished her by banishment from the clan and the country, and since then she decided to attend the well renound Magic School.

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Old 10-06-2004, 11:45 PM Level: 68   HP: 1678 / 1678
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I apologize for not having the RP up yet. Seems to have grown a little larger than I had originally expected. I have several pages typed up so far and I have more to go. So since I've been coming up with more things that are relevant to the RP. I'll give you some reading material ^^

The Great Council

The Great Council was established to hold all of the races of Linona with none excluded. This however does not include the dark races naturally as they are not acknowledged as races of Linona. But anyway, the Great Council was built at the center of the kingdom of the races. Originally it was just a large building that was constructed with a small housing complex for the representatives. But that was millennia's ago. Currently a large city has been built around the Great Council and the the council building itself is just one buidling in a large complex that is its own town almost.

Built elevated from the ground, the Great Council Districts set higher than the rest of the city and the main buildings for the councils at the tallest structures with balconies and open landings all over the building. It was done to allow the people to reflect and look upon the lands that they represented.

The Great Council District is divided into seperate districits that are race specific. It became this way as the original representatives houses grew with the increased number of representatives needed. Soon more houses were needed and families moved making districts of races. There is elevated streets that divide the districts and link all the districts together to the main buildings and the city below. Water also runs through the elevated streets feeding each of the houses.

The Council Building themselves are seperated into towers and even their own buildings. As more councils were made and the Wizardry founded more room was required and the Council Building Complex has grown.

The city around it has become a huge trading center and social center for Linona. It has become a sort of capital for the world. People look to the city for guidance and the future of Linona. The city has never offically been given a name. It has many name that people call it though. Some called it simple the Great Council City or the City of Great Council. The Heremataq and Dragons call it Linontuma meaning City of Linona. Most often just call it Romuata meaning The City for All.

Update on the Race of Men and Women

I originally called the human race of men, but I reconsidered this realizing a few things. The revisions are this. The Race of Men was what it was called before the Battle of Tainted Gods. But the race of men changed in name when the men were placed in a lower status. The women took control and to distance themselves from the negative name that Men had renamed to the Race of Women.

So when you hear the name such as the Women's District refers to the whole race not just the women. Though it is a type of derogitory term.

Also women command great respect from the men, in that men will give the women right of passage in a manner of speaking that women come first. It is also good manners to bow to women. Many men a little grudging to do such things but it remains very much ingrained into the society of the race.


Also time is dealt a little differently. It is counted out in degrees as a more universal method to keep track of time. So its a little bit different.

There will be more probably coming. Best thing is to read what I post in the RP carefully because there will be a lot of tips in there to things. So just try to remember and intergrate it into your posts if it applies.
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Name :: Joe Cacey

Age :: 18

Height :: 6'1"

Wizard Level :: Not studying magic

Race :: Human

Social Standing :: Servant child / Fugitive

Appearance :: Brown haired youth with Orange eyes. (Creepy to look at really.) Wears a cloth shirt and cloth pants. Due to his status as a fugitive, has not had a decent washing in about a month.

Background :: When he was young his father did not love him. He was an outcast due to his accursed orange eyes. "Why can no one see beyond my eyes?" His father had another son named Dimitri and Dimitri received all of his fathers love. Joe's mother died giving birth to Joe. Though by some miracle she came back to life and died again 5 times consecutively. They said the miracle healing was some form of magic but no mages were near her. Joe's father also saw his son as the reason for the death of his wife.

One day Dimitri at the age of 10 decided he wanted more than anything to go to magic school. Dimimtri's father had little money and could not afford it but spoke with the owner of a nearby magic school anyway. When the issue of payment came up Dimitri's father laughed and said " I have younger son! HAHAHA" The owners face became cold and calculating. "I'll take him." He said with a serious smile, and the deal was set.


For the next fourteen years Joe Cacey served under Theodore Sine, the magic school owner, and was treated nothing but horribly. Then one day gold came up missing. It was the work of Mr. Sine's own son Harold, and Joe caught him but Mr. Sine would sooner beleive his son than some servant. Joe was treated brutaly from then on with beatings in them morning labor til late and beatings before bed. Workiong as aservant for Mr. Sine he picked up a little skill in magic. Then one day just before his morning beatings he thrashed Mr. Sine and ran. He has been a fugitive since.


Hey andromeda You know i'm a good enough RPer right? can I join?

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Old 11-02-2004, 07:02 AM Level: 68   HP: 1678 / 1678
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Your activity is not that good to make me say yes. I think about it and when I get the RP completed and ready to be put up. You know then. Also, no sigs.

Update on the RP >< Yeah its late. But I am still working on it. I think it is getting closer to being finished. End of this week I think I should be able to have it done. I think.
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Old 11-07-2004, 10:01 PM Level: 68   HP: 1678 / 1678
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Well I have finally finished the RP with as much as I could have done. There was still a lot more that I had wished to add about Culture, History, Beliefs, etc, but I'll have to continue it in future posts.

I would like to address the issue of magic in the RP, since I may have been a little vague or confusing about some of the aspects of magic. Magic is a very broad art, that has a large range of uses, skills, spells and abilities, as well as a very long history as you can see.

Magic is an everyday thing that about 90% of the people have, but choose not to use because of the possibilities that it might cause. Magic's past is a bloody one that people a little cautious about. They learn enough to understand and control to some small degree the "Wild Magic" that they have. Wild Magic is the term the Wizardry has for the hugely untapped and potential magic that lives in most people. What they learn in their schools teaches them the ability to heal small cuts and bruises, make fires for cooking, and a few other things. It is not a lot, but its enough for everyday life and for them to be able to control it so its not completely wild.

Magic itself is a very wide subject as I said. The Wizardry has numerous majors that can range from Battle Magic, Holy Magic, Healing Magic, Dark Magic, Spellcastor, and more. There are even other non-combatant uses and majors like Architecture, crafting majors and more. It is a large field and the Wizardry has grown from the vastness and potential of magic.

That being said, magic is a very open ended art, giving you a lot of leeway, but just keep things in reason. And now you naturally aren't going to be an architect, because they don't fight, it does give more of a feel and air to the RP to include such things. Have fun and add to the richness and potential.

The members for the RP are as follows.
Dragonheart
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Shadow (Your on Perole, you are going to have to prove yourself, but you are in)
And myself.
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Old 11-15-2004, 09:14 AM Level: 19   HP: 14 / 450
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*just read your post* Don't tell me we have to post close to the equilvalent of yours in length. >_< Mine was shorter than I hoped but nothing as long and extensive as your Andromeda. *sweat*
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I don't expect any to post to the extent that I do. Though it would be nice, there is only a few people who do. All I ask is that you post with some amount of length, If you keep your posts not much shorter than what you have now you are fine. I don't expect people to post as long as me. That is how I write and only a few others write as I do, so I don't expect it from everyone else. Post well each time and you'll be fine.
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Yeah, I'm one of the ones that can post like him if I got really into it and carried away. Which is a rare occasion. Though I might make a surprise post.
I remember my longest post to date was 13,000 characters, Lol.
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13000? *shivers* I was a little intimidated to post actually and no I don't plan on having my post in this RP shorter than the one I had up. How much time did you spend planning this storyline? Phew!
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13k is probably short to average length for me. But umm time, I spent a few days sorting out the plot line, most of the rest of the stuff, I make up on the fly as I type. Though at this point what I type already exists somewhere within my mind to some degree, just not fully spoken yet. But do expect my posts to long.
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