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Jack lie down and felt a sleep at once."YOU MUST PREVENT IT"the dark voice whispered.The next thing he saw was darkness then a sudden light.He could see a man with spiky yellow hair he reminded him of himself.he carefully lowered a girl into the water,he looked very sad."Sephorith,you will pay for this"the man said.
Sephorith Sephorith Sephorith Sephorith "Jack wake up,we are going"Joseph said. "where are we going" "to (that town where Red XIII is from ,from cant remember the name)" Two hours later they walked into the town. "Rumors says Shinra is doing something,but lets rest first" that night they were siting around the fire."Lets open a resistance group fighting against Shinra"Jack said."But what should we call it" Draco asked."what about AVALANCHE?" (when Cloud is in that town,Barret says that AVALANCHE was formed there) |
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[[OOC: good idea man]]
Joseph walked up the mountain through the stairways,he had heard there was a very wise Mage or soceror here,he wanted to ask about the Anchients[sp?] He was one,and it bothered him greatly,he had never told anyone but he about ot tell the Old Man the greatest Secret he had ever told |
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mean while Joseph spent all night talking to the man,he didnt know who the man was but he talked with him anyway
"well I'd better go my allys are waiting" "but Joseph you mut know something,there will be a great evil befall you,and you must change your Destiny to save the planet" "huh?" "I have saw into the future and you will die" "NO WAY......I dont believe your hocus Pokus stories" Joseph walked out and climed down the mountain |
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it was morning and Jack could hear people getting ready to leave outside.He opened his eyes.He could only see darkness.The lamp went on.Everyting got much lighter.He looked around.On the wall only his sword was hanging.
Outside everybody was waiting for him."so where are we going now Angel?"It looked like the whole AVALANCHE group was waiting for the answer. |
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" I can't believe we actually pulled this off" yelled Draco. He watched his come outside and said" What took you so long to wake up Jack I tried to wake you but, it didn't work." Draco then walked over to Jack and whispered " I had a strange dream last night but, i'll tell you about it later." Okay now let's have a plan of attack I think we should destroy each of Shin-ra's mako reactors that should really hurt them and we should go in teams of three." Draco had a good idea going as he said it out loud to Avalanche.
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"I have a team suggestion,Me Angel and Draco,We can call our team-AVALANCHE main or something like that"Jack said.
"ok,our team can blow the first reactor:reactor 3"He showed the spot the map of midgar. "But isnt Midgar a long way to go from here?"Jack asked. "Not if we travel with a airship,I talked to a man here who owns one he will give it for 1mil gil and that should`nt be a thing with our money" "then we leave 4 o`clock"Angel said and walked away. The engine was turning and jumping it was a old ship.Jack barerly breathed were he was standing.He was standing on the engine helping Draco with the luggage."So what was the dream?"he asked. |
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"In my dream I saw a yellow haired boy and he talking to a girl and then he gave her a flower and then I heard a voice say this was my nephew."Draco said to Jack. Draco felt a weird connection with his dreams and Jack's dreams.
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[[OCC:sorry I havent been on here for a while guys]]
Angel jumped in and watched as the others followed him "well guys let go blow these stupid reactors" they drove to Madigar and broke into the 3rd reacors wall and made theyre way up to the top where they would destroy it with thier Swords |
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"you mean you gonna bust the reactor with a sword and then escape,thats imposisble"Jack yelled at Angel."calm down wel use a bomb"
"arrest them!" "o`no the shinra" "DUNK,KABOOM" Jack carefully opened his eyes.it was dark......again.He got up.the prison cell was small and dark.in cells on each of his sides draco and angel was sitting. "finally,you awake,they arrested us"Angel said. |
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"Well this si great were lockup in a cell"Draco said to Jack.Draco kept trying to break open the gate but it wasn't working."Nice idea using the bomb stupid"Draco yelled to Angel. Draco was not in a good mood.
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They followed Angel.
"While we are here,why dont blow up the whole reactor 4?" "Good idea!"Jack said sarkastic. Three guards runned at our hereos.Jack cut one of them.He was thrown into the wall.Draco cut one guard to.Angel throwed one into the wall ,after that there were no wall at sector 4 prison. "How do we get to H.Q,its at least a 1000 miles walk" "what about that"Jack was pointing his finger at a airship. In they were loking down at the sector. "Take this!"Jack yelled threw a bomb down at sector 4. "stop them!!!"a guard was yelling.Soon he wasnt there anymore. The team was sitting around a table."blowing sector 3 was afailure" "Yeah,but we blew sector4" |
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"Jack teach me some more of your sword moves before we go blow up the next reactor"Draco said to Jack.Draco then said to the group"The next we should destroy is the reactor in south of Midgar reactor 6 we should leave tomorrow."
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