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07-07-2008, 03:24 AM
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As stated in the thread for the story itself, I'd like all comments (if any) to be posted in here. That was the chapters are more fluent and not broken down by other posts. Any opinion whether good or bad, praise or on improvements. Anything about it that you want to say, please do so in here.
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07-07-2008, 07:56 AM
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Wow. So far, it seems like the story is brill, and the way you've written it is amazing. You couldn't have worded it any better.
I can't find any faults so far, and it was written beautifully. Well done  Can't wait for you to continue it.
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