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Old 02-21-2008, 04:04 AM Level: 15  HP: 23 / 357
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OldBean Zero(Prequel) - Comments

I don't think I need to explain. Comments here please! Good or bad, whatever. As long as it's detailed, I'll be happy. If the criticism is something along the lines of 'omg you suck' with nothing else of interest, don't even bother posting in here. That is all I ask.

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Was interesting, but it lost some sense of humour halfway through the story.

Rating by myself: 6/10



OldBean 2(Sequel)

A few pages explaining the events after OB1.

Rating by myself: 4/10


OldBean Zero(Prequel, currently being worked on)
Best. Written. Piece of work. I have ever done. Superb...absolutely superb...

Rating by myself: 10/10



List of OB projects being worked on:
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Zomgz u lyk suk OB! >.>

I'm kidding Oldbean. On a serious note, your writing keeps getting better and better as I read your stories. I've also had noticed that you have a new style now. Sorta reminds me of the OB show the way you label the locations and stuff.

I'm also liking Zero. His personality, he has this sarcastic but slick humor in a way. I was wondering what happened more in the forest though. Damn you and your cliffhangers!

Really good though OB. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Thanks for the reply. I do agree with the fact Zero is in a way better than OB...but then again, both have their flaws. Zero has a dark side, and OB is one annoying owl.

By the way, to squash some "Zero is ripped from Megaman" rumours that will soon surface, I have posted Mission Three and Four. M4 has something that will make all "MMZero remake" believers vanish . And thus I say. OBZero is OBZero.

Now...*goes off to write another 20 more pages*
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All stories part of the OB series is in here. Credits too. And other stuff. Click to view:
Thanks to Nathan for the sig!

OldBean
Link coming soon. I'll put it back here later.
Was interesting, but it lost some sense of humour halfway through the story.

Rating by myself: 6/10



OldBean 2(Sequel)

A few pages explaining the events after OB1.

Rating by myself: 4/10


OldBean Zero(Prequel, currently being worked on)
Best. Written. Piece of work. I have ever done. Superb...absolutely superb...

Rating by myself: 10/10



List of OB projects being worked on:
  • OldBean Zero (prequel)
  • The OldBean Show (spinoff)

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