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Welcome to my Lyrics thread. Firstly, you may have seen my songs floating around. They're still available. Where? This very thread. And in chronological order too. So a big thanks to our favourite literature mod Great Writer Vicky for fusing them, and ENJOY! Feel Free to comment on any song. Just make it clear which ones you're referring too. Song Index (Thanks to Omega Weapon for the idea) Crazy Smile (Bottom of this very post.... )No-One's War Draining Shell Song For the Fallen (Vigilante's requiem) My Private Wonderland School Days Sledge (Hammer) Fiery Resolve (Eyes of Flame) Joker Card Wine Bottle Air Guitar Blurring of the Lines Exorcism Howl (Primal Mind) Thoughts of a Beast Looped Angel of Destruction Unforgotten Paths Question There Soul Crescendo Lose It Rings of Steel Vagrant Mind I.N.U.P.V. Land of Euphoria Immortality Total songs: 26 EDIT: I honestly couldn't be screwed to list these anymore, so if you want an easier way to find my newer works, just go to my deviant art page here: http://silv3r89.deviantart.com/ ________________________________ Crazy Smile by celtic_silver There is a battle in my head, will be playin' til I'm dead. Sometimes I wonder why, I even bother at all to try. Seein' the shit they do, Makes me worry a lot for you. So I'll be fightin' for a while, With a hell of a crazy smile. While I might seem a rock, there is a toll to block. Got some scarring on my arm, it can give ya some alarm, looking at the harmmm... Woah, There is a battle in my head, will be playin' til I'm dead. Sometimes I wonder why, I even bother at all to try. Seein' the shit they do, Makes me worry a lot for you. So I'll be fightin' for a while, With a hell of a crazy smile. I have many a psycho friend, on whose help I can really depend. I sometimes wonder why, neither I nor they can cry. It just goes to show, what the fighting can do to youuu... Oh yeah, There's a battle in my head, will be playin' til I'm dead. Sometimes I wonder why, I even bother at all to try. Seein' the shit they do, Makes me worry a lot for you. So I'll be fightin' for a while, With a hell of a crazy smile. My shirts are all getting torn, and my jeans are getting worn. They get damaged from the bash, and the roadrash takes my cash. There is many a bill, but greater is the willll... So, I'll fight the battle in my head, will be playin' til I'm dead. Sometimes I wonder why, I even bother at all to try. Seein' the shit they do, Makes me worry a lot for you. So I'll be fightin' for a while, With a hell of a crazy smile. Playing til I'm dead, Fighting until I'm bled, I know that there is just no way To give up this conflict anyway... Fighting the battle in my head, Playin' til I'm dead. Wonderin' why, I bother to try. Seein' the shit they do, Causes me to worry for you. I'll keep it for a while, MY BLOODY CRAZY SMILE! ___________________________ This one was in my head for a while, what do yers think? Last edited by Silver; 06-17-2009 at 09:28 PM.. | ||||||||
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| Dude, good job on this. I really like it. I know you told me its a song, but it also sounds like a poem in a way. Actually it could make a great poem. ![]() Anyways good job. The lyric's are good though. It really says something. And you should definitely make some more song lyrics in the future. | ||||||||||||
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| Rides the Shoopuf. ;) | Thanks. And yeah I know there is a lot of rhyme, but it's sung/shouted. Though it doesn't say it anywhere, try to picture the verses in a slower rock way, the chorus in a metal style. And the end gets faster. Hope that makes a little more sense. | ||||||||
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| FapFapFapFapFapFapFapFapF apFapFap | That's really awesome, Celtic. The lyrics are excellent, and I really hope you keep writing them in the future. I do see what Diddy meant by how it seems like a poem to read, but I can really imagine it as a great song moreso, especially with the description you just posted. Anyway, really good. Hope to see more sometime. | ||||||||
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Inventory | Well man, i expect you to take a video of yourself singing it with the visual & sound effects & all sh**t included. hahahahaha.... Anyways, it's the second best thing i've read-heard (in a way) after Chappelle's poem in Def Poetry Jam. Good work. | ||||||||||||
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No-One's War Look around at night, what do you see? I see a thug or two, staring back at me. Getting in the midst, a twist of the wrist, blocking a knife, from causing me strife, shouldn't be like this, dodging death's kiss. Used to bring me down, Now it's - that dark part of me. This battle is no one's war, just a bunch of thugs and poor. There's no just cause it seems, just a bunch of - broken dreams. So many tough guys, so many thugs, why they all fight? It sure beats me. Some might be for money, others for fame, others make a difference, some could've fooled me. Geting whacked in the head, blood flashes red. Bat spins out, causes me to shout, shouldn't be like this, dodging death's kiss. It used to bring me down, Now it's - that dark part of me. This battle is no one's war, just a bunch of thugs and poor. There's no just cause it seems, just a bunch of - broken dreams. When will it stop, it seems kinda pointless. Drugs and money just aren't worth all that, no. This battle is no one's war, just a bunch of thugs and poor. There's no just cause it seems, just a bunch of - broken dreams. This is no one's war, just a bunch of broken dreams. ____________________________ This is my second song after Crazy Smile. Hope yers like it. | ||||||||
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Inventory | ![]() ![]() Oh yeah baby, this is a war!! What the hell is that celtic !!! You are doing a great job, I think you are spending hours and hours try to make your lyrics good ![]() I liked the lyrics and specially this section: This battle is no one's war, just a bunch of thugs and poor. There's no just cause it seems, just a bunch of - broken dreams. and this: Getting whacked in the head, blood flashes red. Bat spins out, causes me to shout, shouldn't be like this, dodging death's kiss. It used to bring me down, Now it's - that dark part of me. You have my vote. Keep going ! | ||||||||||||
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| Christ Celtic!!!! This one's really good. Definitely puts a picture in your head. You must've spend some time working on the lyrics like Omega mentioned. They're really good dude. Keep em lyrics coming!! ![]() | ||||||||||||
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Inventory | Hmm, this one's good but I am just trying to picture how this would go with music. *gets a beat in my head, starts to nod and then headbang mildly* Yeah, catchy. | ||||||||||||
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Draining Shell My life ain't hard, I'm the ace card. I did it all before, NOW I'VE LOST MY ROAR. My spirit's here, my spirit's there. But when I look, I CAN'T FIND IT ANYWHERE. I had a soul, some time ago. Now it's lost. LOST WITHIN THE MESS. Tangle of thoughts. A waking dream. Makes no sense, THOUGH I SING IT EVERYDAY. Woah, Draining shell, my private hell, essence pouring, soul ignoring, DRAINED UNTIL THE END. I do what's right. Is it real-ly? Question myself, I got a burning feel-ing. My will binds me, to make me, me. Not to sure, if it's supposed to be. Just gotta wonder, WHAT'LL HAPPEN... IF IT FAILS? Woah, Draining shell, my private hell, essence pouring, soul ignoring, DRAINED UNTIL THE END. Draining shell, my private hell, essence pouring, soul ignoring, DRAINED UNTIL THE END. _______________________ Well, guys this is my third song, and actually the first I started work on. I tried to get some of my feelings about how I feel in some ways across, yet it still feels a little incomplete. What do you guys think? | ||||||||
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Inventory | Excellent.Write more like that and you'll be in my good book for poetry, I might even ask you for lyrics to some songs on my next single or album. We might even do this just for one concert. If you don't mind? | ||||||||||||
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| Rides the Shoopuf. ;) | Thanks. Too kind. And why not? It could be interesting. | ||||||||
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| FapFapFapFapFapFapFapFapF apFapFap | That's really awesome, just amazing to read. The wording in it is fantastic, and I can definitely imagine something like this making it as a big song. Damn.. I've read the lyrics over about 4 times XD. Can't keep my eyes off them, lol. Really awesome. | ||||||||
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Song For the Fallen (Vigilante's requiem) Where are they now? Those who fought beside us. Where are they now? Those who fought alone. Where are they now? The Champions. Where are they now? They fell... They fell for the cause. A man from Sydney. He knew what was right. Trusted his beliefs, and man could he fight. For justice he yearned, but then as he turned, took a knife through his back, And death he had learned. Where are they now? The Warriors of our time. Where are they now? The Bringers of change. Where are they now? The Strong of heart. Where are they now? They fell... They fell for the cause. Knew a guy from the 'burbs, a plank he could weild, til into his brain, a knife was then meld. Many did miss him, others did cry. Following his example, others will try. Where are the heroes, where are the mighty, Where are the warriors, blood stained unsightly? Where are they now? For what did they fight? They fought for their homes, and what they thought right. They destroyed monsters, of society. Drugg-ed fiends, Cor-rupt hogs, and Beasts of nature, with a war on peace. Where are the heroes, where are the mighty, Where are the warriors, blood stained unsightly? They were the best, and they were the worst. The fallen, the example, the truth. Where are they now? _____________________________ This song is different to my others. I made it for not only myself, but my mates, many who risk themselves unneccessarily. It has a much slower beat than my other songs. Feel free to comment. | ||||||||
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My Private Wonderland I look around, I see so many, many shiny things. Broken glass, aluminium foil. Treasures indeed, for a guy like me. I sit in my nest, drinking my necter. I gaze through the fog, in the room I'm in. The room, this room, IS MY PRIVATE WONDERLAND Take an orange one, my senses are reeling. Down with a blue, then I can see time. Drink the clear one, my pain goes away. My thoughts are a needle, my actions the cure. My head starts to spin, where do I begin? Making life easy, though it may be quite sleasy. I scoff a shroom, takes me to my doom. Either a sense of euphoria, Or a trip to the tomb. I've seen so much, and yet so little. Med behind the couch, it looks like a skittle. I gaze at it, it gazes back. one has to go, AND IT WILL NOT BE ME Panadol's crap, and Nurofen's lazy, Take them with beer, and you'll go crazy. They make quite the mix, can be such a fix, sideaffects are death, NO, NOT LIKELY My shiny's grow big, they seem kinda scary, I've had to much shit, though I can-not be sure. Getting ya stomach pumped, is a painful bore. Watching it happen, can leave you in awe. Go back home, I'll sleep it off. But then again, tomorrow I'll find it, MY PRIVATE WONDERLAND _______________________ Well this song's got a very irregular rhythm, but it's fast. I wrote this completely off my head, and it sounds sortta nice. So, anyway, enjoy. | ||||||||
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Inventory | Woah.......Dammit, this is the best one you have posted yet....I think it's really amazing. If only we could mix it up with some music & make it sort of a Vigilente Theme; it would be absolution for the Guild & not only. This is one hell of a poem mate. | ||||||||||||
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Inventory | If only one thing I would ask, ARE YOUR SERIOUS !!!! Man you are great, This one is awesome, better than your others. Quote:
One more thing, You have to send this poem to the Australian soldiers in Iraq Keep going, you are amazing. Last edited by Omega Weapon; 05-27-2007 at 07:56 AM.. | |||||||||||||
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Inventory | You know Celtic, I had an album planned but it never surfaced, it was called For the Fallen. It had a song called hiro which means "hero" It was a big metal piece that lasted nearly 14 minutes with a great orchestra part backing it and a demonic chorus set following it too. I don't know this song reminded me of it. ^^ | ||||||||||||
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| *bookmarks link* ![]() This is my favorite song lyrics you came up with Celtic. All of them are awesome but this one stands out to me for some reason. The wording is good like Rumour mentioned and if it ever become's a song, it'll be a hit! | ||||||||||||
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School Days Sit in a chair, open a book. Chewing on gum, makes you a crook. Act like a tool, feel like a fool, Getting the paper, couldn't be straighter. Cannot be failin', or you'll wailin', doomed to a life of chores. Compulsory lessons, jailcell sessions. Confined like a budgie, with both wings broken. HAD TO, Listen what they say, enjoy your holiday. When you go back, HEAR WHAT'S SPOKEN. Getting in trouble, detentions would double, put-ting us on the run. Used to play dumb, it was quite fun. Til we got busted, anyway. Losing a tooth, nowhere the truth. Fighters would run and hide. Victims would cower, have a warm shower, whilst bullies act-ed snide. Compulsory lessons, jailcell sessions. Confined like a budgie, with both wings broken. WE'D, Listen what they say, enjoy our holiday. When we went back, HEAR WHAT'S SPOKEN. When we were young, we were rarely sprung. Couple years later, told we should be hung. Fighting spree, school community Against the rules? WHO CARES? 'Cos, Punishment was kindda fun, a day off school, good for a run. Off for a week, no reward for the meek. Repu-tation as a freak. Compulsory lessons, jailcell sessions. With both wings broken, we'd hear what's spoken. Compulsory lessons, jailcell sessions. With both wings broken, we'd hear what's spoken. We'd know there'd be no next term. There will be, NO NEXT TERM ___________________ I wrote this song during school. While I want to learn more and such, I do feel the school is too restrictive, yet doesn't do a thing for anything more serious like hardcore bullying. Hope you enjoy this one. Post your comments. | ||||||||
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