Celtic's Lyric Thread

Silver · 05-25-2007, 07:13 PM

Welcome to my Lyrics thread. Firstly, you may have seen my songs floating around. They're still available. Where? This very thread. And in chronological order too. So a big thanks to our favourite literature mod Great Writer Vicky for fusing them, and ENJOY!

Feel Free to comment on any song. Just make it clear which ones you're referring too.

Song Index (Thanks to Omega Weapon for the idea)

Crazy Smile (Bottom of this very post....

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No-One's War
Draining Shell
Song For the Fallen (Vigilante's requiem)
My Private Wonderland
School Days
Sledge (Hammer)
Fiery Resolve (Eyes of Flame)
Joker Card
Wine Bottle Air Guitar
Blurring of the Lines
Exorcism
Howl (Primal Mind)
Thoughts of a Beast
Looped
Angel of Destruction
Unforgotten Paths
Question
There
Soul Crescendo
Lose It
Rings of Steel
Vagrant Mind
I.N.U.P.V.
Land of Euphoria
Immortality

Total songs: 26
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Crazy Smile by celtic_silver

There is a battle in my head,
will be playin' til I'm dead.
Sometimes I wonder why,
I even bother at all to try.
Seein' the shit they do,
Makes me worry a lot for you.
So I'll be fightin' for a while,
With a hell of a crazy smile.

While I might seem a rock,
there is a toll to block.
Got some scarring on my arm,
it can give ya some alarm,
looking
at
the
harmmm...

Woah,

There is a battle in my head,
will be playin' til I'm dead.
Sometimes I wonder why,
I even bother at all to try.
Seein' the shit they do,
Makes me worry a lot for you.
So I'll be fightin' for a while,
With a hell of a crazy smile.

I have many a psycho friend,
on whose help I can really depend.
I sometimes wonder why,
neither I nor they can cry.
It just goes to show,
what
the
fighting
can do to youuu...

Oh yeah,

There's a battle in my head,
will be playin' til I'm dead.
Sometimes I wonder why,
I even bother at all to try.
Seein' the shit they do,
Makes me worry a lot for you.
So I'll be fightin' for a while,
With a hell of a crazy smile.

My shirts are all getting torn,
and my jeans are getting worn.
They get damaged from the bash,
and the roadrash takes my cash.
There is many a bill,
but
greater
is
the
willll...

So,

I'll fight the battle in my head,
will be playin' til I'm dead.
Sometimes I wonder why,
I even bother at all to try.
Seein' the shit they do,
Makes me worry a lot for you.
So I'll be fightin' for a while,
With a hell of a crazy smile.

Playing til I'm dead,
Fighting until I'm bled,
I know that there is just no way
To give up this conflict anyway...

Fighting the battle in my head,
Playin' til I'm dead.
Wonderin' why,
I bother to try.
Seein' the shit they do,
Causes me to worry for you.
I'll keep it for a while,
MY BLOODY CRAZY SMILE!
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This one was in my head for a while, what do yers think?

Fishie · 05-25-2007, 07:36 PM

Dude, good job on this. I really like it. I know you told me its a song, but it also sounds like a poem in a way. Actually it could make a great poem.

Anyways good job. The lyric's are good though. It really says something. And you should definitely make some more song lyrics in the future.

Silver · 05-25-2007, 07:38 PM

Thanks. And yeah I know there is a lot of rhyme, but it's sung/shouted. Though it doesn't say it anywhere, try to picture the verses in a slower rock way, the chorus in a metal style. And the end gets faster.

Hope that makes a little more sense.

Anachlirium · 05-25-2007, 10:45 PM

That's really awesome, Celtic. The lyrics are excellent, and I really hope you keep writing them in the future. I do see what Diddy meant by how it seems like a poem to read, but I can really imagine it as a great song moreso, especially with the description you just posted.

Anyway, really good. Hope to see more sometime.

CLOUD · 05-26-2007, 12:14 AM

Well man, i expect you to take a video of yourself singing it with the visual & sound effects & all sh**t included. hahahahaha....

Anyways, it's the second best thing i've read-heard (in a way) after Chappelle's poem in Def Poetry Jam.

Good work.

Silver · 05-26-2007, 04:53 PM

No-One's War

Look around at night,
what do you see?
I see a thug or two,
staring back at me.

Getting in the midst,
a twist of the wrist,
blocking a knife,
from causing me strife,
shouldn't be like this,
dodging death's kiss.
Used to bring me down,
Now it's - that dark part of me.

This battle is no one's war,
just a bunch of thugs and poor.
There's no just cause it seems,
just a bunch of - broken dreams.

So many tough guys,
so many thugs,
why they all fight?
It sure beats me.
Some might be for money,
others for fame,
others make a difference,
some could've fooled me.

Geting whacked in the head,
blood flashes red.
Bat spins out,
causes me to shout,
shouldn't be like this,
dodging death's kiss.
It used to bring me down,
Now it's - that dark part of me.

This battle is no one's war,
just a bunch of thugs and poor.
There's no just cause it seems,
just a bunch of - broken dreams.

When will it stop,
it seems kinda pointless.
Drugs and money just aren't worth all that,
no.

This battle is no one's war,
just a bunch of thugs and poor.
There's no just cause it seems,
just a bunch of - broken dreams.
This is no one's war,
just a bunch of
broken dreams.
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This is my second song after Crazy Smile. Hope yers like it.

Omega Weapon · 05-26-2007, 05:05 PM

Oh yeah baby, this is a war!!

What the hell is that celtic !!! You are doing a great job, I think you are spending hours and hours try to make your lyrics good

I liked the lyrics and specially this section:

This battle is no one's war,
just a bunch of thugs and poor.
There's no just cause it seems,
just a bunch of - broken dreams.

and this:

Getting whacked in the head,
blood flashes red.
Bat spins out,
causes me to shout,
shouldn't be like this,
dodging death's kiss.
It used to bring me down,
Now it's - that dark part of me.

You have my vote. Keep going !

Fishie · 05-26-2007, 05:51 PM

Christ Celtic!!!! This one's really good. Definitely puts a picture in your head. You must've spend some time working on the lyrics like Omega mentioned. They're really good dude. Keep em lyrics coming!!

Kat · 05-26-2007, 05:55 PM

Hmm, this one's good but I am just trying to picture how this would go with music. *gets a beat in my head, starts to nod and then headbang mildly* Yeah, catchy.

Silver · 05-26-2007, 08:57 PM

Draining Shell

My life ain't hard,
I'm the ace card.
I did it all before,
NOW I'VE LOST MY ROAR.

My spirit's here,
my spirit's there.
But when I look,
I CAN'T FIND IT ANYWHERE.

I had a soul,
some time ago.
Now it's lost.
LOST WITHIN THE MESS.

Tangle of thoughts.
A waking dream.
Makes no sense,
THOUGH I SING IT EVERYDAY.

Woah,

Draining shell,
my private hell,
essence pouring,
soul ignoring,
DRAINED UNTIL THE END.

I do what's right.
Is it real-ly?
Question myself,
I got a burning feel-ing.

My will binds me,
to make me, me.
Not to sure,
if it's supposed to be.
Just gotta wonder,
WHAT'LL HAPPEN...
IF IT FAILS?

Woah,

Draining shell,
my private hell,
essence pouring,
soul ignoring,
DRAINED UNTIL THE END.

Draining shell,
my private hell,
essence pouring,
soul ignoring,
DRAINED UNTIL THE END.

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Well, guys this is my third song, and actually the first I started work on. I tried to get some of my feelings about how I feel in some ways across, yet it still feels a little incomplete. What do you guys think?