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This poem speaks to me Sinister. It reminds me of that last trace of the voice of public reason in my head I killed that time ago. The last thing to tell me of my limitations after I even stopped listening to my own voice of reason.
It also seems to speak of other things such as the people you know who may try to bring you down. Or that's something I got out of it. The repetition of 'You Can't' seems to reinforce this for me. It's a good poem. Keep writing.
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Up to no good...
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Thanks Furore, I still will write. Just took a pre-semester hiatus. But I've come up with a new one based on personal experiences. Not a serious, complicated, profound or very good poem at all. But one that I had fun typing up. Due to it's rather superfluous and silly nature, it has no name.
EDIT: I've changed my mind, I'll give it a title. One sufficiently simple. Latrodectism There once was a black spider Who once bit a writer Who had sat down besider her To smoke his pipe... It was just a light kiss Upon his pale wrist It was just a slight sting That a slight itch, did bring A slight sting to a slight itch An itch to an ache His skin, he did rake His muscles, quake... His eyes sang with tears His pain, he did show But he did not kill the spider He did not kill the widow...
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Up to no good...
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The “Great” Marionette In a dusty attic All allayed with grime, Sputtered by moths And bested by time. Where we caught an old puppet Out of a discolored cage, Strung in a web Of it’s own plastic strings. Somber in face, And somber in dress. Sad were the sounds That it’s hinges protest. Pedals like petals, Hoisted the doll. Smoke from metal Helped to settle the pall. Lamps and lanterns illuminate The pantomime, and translate, The motions of our captive mime. In Waltzing time… It’s little wooden clogs Danced across the dresser. We laughed as we forced it To dance Tarantellas. To our laughs, it would frown. We’d spin it around. Clatter ’midst clutter, And rattle to ground. ‘Twas neither a matter Deep nor profound, Unto which wit Or meaning was bound. Amen… Oh Woe…
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#34 (permalink) | ||
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Up to no good...
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Liturgies of the Literate --------------------------- Liturgy of the Essayist The friction of a whispered word can set the world ablaze. And when that word is shouted, believe that lives will shatter Break and batter along the matter the word was spoken Liturgy of the Author So I say, that he has said, something I will say again In words jumbled, fumbled and rearranged I shall say it again. Liturgy of the Historian In a history of written works both witty, fitting and memorableOur lives sum in a swell of softly printed syllables That part was good and we must not forget that other part as well To sum it all up is a tale that was told so that we would tell Liturgy of the Dreamer But we must not let our shining dreams Outshine ourselves, for we were their beholders, That makes us shine just as bright. -OmniTense
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Up to no good...
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Angel Band God is naked in his birthday suit, Loudly swearing into a flute Gabe keeps pace, fingering the brass Michael sings out of his ass God swears over how Michael sings While Satan keeps the beat with his wings Hear the music sway in you Hear the jazz see you through Jesus conducts the flow and flux From his perch on top of his crux Nobody there has the score They just make their heavenly roar...
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Up to no good...
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And How We Have All Been Deceived What is what and, How was it made Can it be broken Can it be saved... Tell me now, how? How you've never felt So empty before Will you die or will you wilt? Breath in and out again After all, we're alive... Welcome, my friend Don't be afraid Of living receding Of darkness increasing The time flies by We no longer ask why In night now descending With fear wickedly mending With you now believing Life, no more deceiving As it is ending... The above post is intended for an audience of one. A single member of this forum -Sin
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Up to no good...
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That one may smile… In stems of a steppe In gardens we wept I knew you as true And never a shrew You have a gloam It reddens your eye It slims at your face As you ruddily cry All that you've said But Perfervid Flak Can’t you have named The knife in my back We’ve come a mile Nay, a mile and a half That you may smile And evilly laugh I have in my pocket Halos and Horns How is it that you, With derision and scorn, A smile of thorns Leave to me To wear but the horns We have traveled a million To the very last mile That one may smile, And smile, and still be a villain
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Up to no good...
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Sepulchretan In a creak on a stair, Over colder memorial, Under my coffin’s lid. Away shall I slip Through kirkyard and crypt Belted and sheathed upon my hip A pocket knife to prick my thumb Blisters of wind to make me numb There in the mire stood a spire Leashed to a cross with razor wire A woman’s bosom which bled not milk But blood that ran like fluid silk Abreast of the breast was tacked a sign “Whosoever upon this dine, Drink not ye oil, nor drink ye wine…” A drip to my lip, fell from above Tasting of sweet mother’s love At the base of the place laid a crown A gem diadem filled to the brim With stiff mayhem, i.e. this poem Reading this script, I saw No need to write what Had already been penned…
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#39 (permalink) | ||
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I really like this poem Sinister. Its dark but at the same time its really good. It puts a picture in my head but it tells a story and it tells it beautifully.
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(Did I even spell that right? o.O) But yeah. Awesome work bro!
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#40 (permalink) | ||
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Up to no good...
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Sad in Effect
raw leaves rest, once in a year winter spins here bending colors to white former glories, warmer stories were buried under crumb and crust bitter and hoary losing no sunshine we found her lying, burned, buried alive charred and frozen to the lares shrine gone away from home to pray alone burned by the candle she lit they say suffer the sad please yourself with what you have and what they had they never believed that once in a world cruelty could befall one so young that youth was easy and age unsung ravens pinched her flesh and fed one prying, sickly prying her eyeball from her head of this poor girl and poorer world only one thing could be said thank death that she was dead
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Up to no good...
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Untitled
The Men on TV all say... "Atlas has an evil axis... So good men, rankle your bones Rattle your sabre and spit your blood" The war cries just don't belong Dulce et decorum tastes all wrong Faex populi, I feel so used. So little ago, we said so long But Rankle bones Rattle our sabres Spit our blood On foreign ground. Taste it Watch us Waste it We'll baste the sand We bring the blood They bring the bombs The land has the sand God help us...we'll make red glass...
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