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12-20-2006, 07:36 AM
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This song was originally a poem i wrote but i have since added music to it and now i play it at all of my shows. If you like it you like it if you dont i dont really care.
~DARK STORY~ Pages turning in my head, Fantasies are filled with dread, Soon enough you'll all be dead, DARK STORY! Seeing things that cant be seen, Heaven Hell and in between, So distorted so unclean, DARK STORY! (chorus) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) Come with me and you will be, Inside my dark story, Come with me and you will see, Eternal Blasphemy. You feel its all your heart can take, As your will begins to break, This evil feeling you cant shake, DARK STORY! Blood and bile, death and rot, Filth and maggots, dirt and snot, A fairytale this is not, DARK STORY! (chorus) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) Come with me and you will be, Inside my dark story, Come with me and you will see, Eternal Blasphemy. ( GUITAR SOLO ) Feelings turn insincere, All your courage fades to fear, Now you know your end is near, DARK STORY! Corpses lifeless full of mold, As its starting to unfold, Our dark story has been told, DARK STORY! (chorus) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, COME WITH ME, ( SCREAM ) Come with me and you will be, Inside my dark story, Come with me and you will see, Eternal Blasphemy. COME WITH ME! |
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12-21-2006, 12:56 PM
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like the begining of the song but i sort of got a little confusing reading it with some of the ryheming. it is long but just cause of the reapeating chrous, that is fine between all that screaming and one thing what does "Eternal Blasphemy." mean, i don't have a single clue but overall it is good.
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12-21-2006, 01:01 PM
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Pretty neat. I write music sometimes as well... but not very good music... I'd like to know what it sounds like with music...
Good job.
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