Lost

[Georgiet]

this is just something that i wrote in class to make me look like i was doing someting, hey it is better than nothing

"Lost"

With no more life
There is nothing to realize
That you will leave me
Is it a fair situation
When given no choice
You were so new to me
But I never used you before
Despite the end of mankind
There was no love
Both of us feeling lonely
I never knew
Until this very moment
That you will be lost in my memories
Will you ever decide on me
Or will you ever take away all this pain from me
Joining the darkness
To get away from you
The only good deed
I did for both you and me
Now I see my dreams fading away
No one esle to believe but me
I am no longer the man you thought I was
But a demon to be released from misery
Even if I cross the line
Will you please hold me one last time
Before I leave this life of misery.

[Death Sentence]

this is really good...it makes me depressed...thats probably why i like it. It has alot of emotion in it. Did you write it for the sake of writing or does it have some real world significance?

[Georgiet]

Originally Posted by Death Sentence

this is really good...it makes me depressed...thats probably why i like it. It has alot of emotion in it. Did you write it for the sake of writing or does it have some real world significance?

i just want came to mind when i jusyt saw a person that i had not seen for about a whole year that just left me for someone esle and that is about it. it seems like a very short story of what i did ti get away from her that's all.

[Death Sentence]

ah i see...well like i said its very good and you should keep writing. im sure you can post up a bunch more fo these. and dont worry ill read them all even if no one else does. lol!

[Georgiet]

Originally Posted by Death Sentence

ah i see...well like i said its very good and you should keep writing. im sure you can post up a bunch more fo these. and dont worry ill read them all even if no one else does. lol!

hey thanks i'll keep that in mind that i've got a reader thanks again

[Death Sentence]

why dont you go check out my thread for my song dark story?? you could give me some pointers on it.

[Tiny]

the peom souds alright but as i read from the other posts, it is about your relation with a girl that just left you right or not, either way like it but don't let it get to you man.

[Georgiet]

Originally Posted by Tiny

the peom souds alright but as i read from the other posts, it is about your relation with a girl that just left you right or not, either way like it but don't let it get to you man.

hey thanks man but now a days it does not reallt bother me at all. i just don't know why maybe i moved on or just don't give a f--k about her anymore but the hell with it.

[Death Sentence]

Hey man i was just thinking maybe sometime we can do a collaboration or something. Im sure the two of us could come up with something awesome.

[Georgiet]

Originally Posted by Death Sentence

Hey man i was just thinking maybe sometime we can do a collaboration or something. Im sure the two of us could come up with something awesome.

you mean writing or music either way it would be great since we sort of kind of write about the some things but you are way more better of a writer since you are more experice through out life but yeah it would be great.