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Old 09-07-2006, 07:11 AM Level: 19  HP: 47 / 455
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Choosing to ignore

Gone for Good
I open my eyes
I'm not awake
I look through the dark
I can't see your face
I call out your name
But I know what I've done.

I open my mind
I'm never alert
I open your hand
I've tossed you away
I try to speak
I can't form the words

You walk away
I can't bear to watch
You've turned me down
Now I can't get back up
You leave just one word
"Why?"
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Knowing the Demon

I look at my reflection
I see the problem
I know now what I've done

Too late to fix it
too late to try
Shes already gone

I never imagined
nor contemplated
the efect of my deed

Why are we frail
When we must fail
I've broken my soul

She tried to reveal
the demon I was
She tried to right my wrongs

I never bothered
Never tried
To listen with my heart

Lonely, I fall
Unmoving, cold
Why should I never know?

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Old 09-07-2006, 01:05 PM Level: 14  HP: 19 / 343
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I open my eyes
I'm not awake
I look through the dark
I can't see your face
I call out your name
But I know what I've done.

I open my mind
I'm never alert
I open your hand
I've tossed you away
I try to speak
I can't form the words

You walk away
I can't bear to watch
You've turned me down
Now I can't get back up
You leave just one word
"Why?"
MAD


This is one of most recent, I'll be posting more later!

Knowing the Demon

I look at my reflection
I see the problem
I know now what I've done

Too late to fix it
too late to try
Shes already gone

I never imagined
nor contemplated
the efect of my deed

Why are we frail
When we must fail
I've broken my soul

She tried to reveal
the demon I was
She tried to right my wrongs

I never bothered
Never tried
To listen with my heart

Lonely, I fall
Unmoving, cold
Why should I never know?
That's a good poem,keep up the great work.
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Old 09-08-2006, 05:28 PM Level: 19  HP: 47 / 455
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Thanks, they were both kinda right after the other, but I was in such a writing mood. I do my best in that kinda mood. I ... well thats for another time that is...
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Old 09-08-2006, 06:52 PM Level: 19  HP: 47 / 455
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I'm not sure what you mean, but heres another one of my works to get your mind in order.

Blinding Shadow

The sun sits high in the sky
While I rest low as can be
Theres no need to rise
Only one thing could change

The lies pile up
The wars rage on
The world slowly dies
I try to hide

The sun now fell
The canon smokes with blood
The raging fires grow
I tried to hide

Fighting for nothing
No one left to defend
Empty supply bins litter my arsenal
Only one word echoes through my viens

"Love"
For all who are gone
All who left me
All who still love me

The world is dead
I have emerged
To fight the foe
That cannot die

Never to win
I storm the castle
And for what ?
Absolutley nothing.
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