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09-04-2006, 01:29 PM
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Clear water from eyes that burn a path
Not tears of joys But of acid Blend with vodka dreams Mix to perfection Create a liquid symbol of depression Undying stream that leaves its mark Cleansing my surface emotions I wish to make the burning stop And so I clear my head Only to find another way For me to live my life today.
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09-05-2006, 06:36 PM
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Genocide Unfolds, I Forgive All
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Seems like something Creed would write. Not exact, but still. This is much better than your other work, keep going this way. You've definately lengthed, and so you get a respect point for that.
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