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Old 08-30-2006, 03:36 PM Level: 2  HP: 0 / 46
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Final Fantasy X-3:wrath Of Seymour

hey i finally thought of the story. okay here we go.
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Tidus: Yuna so who is this vegnagun?
Yuna: Vegnagun was the lost collosus hidden under the Bevelle underground.
Tidus: So Bevelle still contained it's secret's.

Yuna sighs with terror as afraid Tidus will be angry.

Yuna: Tidus there is something I must tell you,but promise you won't be mad.
Tidus: What do you mean Yuna can you expect me not to be mad if I don't know what you're going to ask me.
Yuna:Tidus I'm pregnant.

Tidus is amazed with the great news Yuna told him. Tidus tell Yuna they should go to the farplane to see Yunas family and Tidus' family so as they talk to Tromell now known as Lord Tromell Guado. The Guado launch a preemptive attack, now that they left Vegnagun in the Farplane Seymour wake's up from his slumber and his spirit joins Vegnagun, so as the Guado keeps attacking the Farplane Tidus and Yuna watched the commsphere left in the Farplane. The collosus which is now known as the final fantasy weapon summon's the 3 master terror titans.

Yuna: What is going on?
Tidus: I don't know but, Yuna we must tell Wakka and the other's. Who know's what this idiot is planning to do to Spira.
Yuna: Then we shall. As Yuna calls Rikku, Wakka, Lulu, Kimahri, Paine, the Gullwings.
Brother: Yuna what's your status?
Yuna: Trouble, and I mean big trouble.
Brother: I'm on my way.

This time Seymour found a way to morph aeons into the 3 terror titans which Seymour moved out of the farplane.



sorry couldn't finish the story but I will continue on it please tell me if you like it or if you want me to detail it.

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Formatted by yours truly.

Please don't type in a big block of text next time.



edit by LocoColt04:
What right do you have to edit someone else's work? Next time, don't. If the author wants to write in one massive block if illegible text, that's his choice, not yours. (All the same, Piro does have a point, ENIL. Consider spreading things out next time so that it makes sense.)
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I thought it was good! And wen Yuna told Tidus she was pregnant, I laughed my pants off! I don't know why, but I found that part funny! Plz, write more! I wanna know wut happens! Plus, there's more party members so it's gonna be good! I can't wait 2 see sum more!
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Why did it start off exactly the way the first one did? The pregnant part was original i guess... i don't think any final fantasy game released in the united states contained the word 'pregnant'.



 
 
 
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Actually yes there is. It's called FFX-2. Lulu's pregnant with Wakka's child.
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Actually yes there is. It's called FFX-2. Lulu's pregnant with Wakka's child.
Yeah, but it doesn't actually mension the word "pregnant"! Does it? and u just spoiled a little bit of X-2!
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Evenesca, our very own Planet, which is, the best Planet EVER.
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It is ace.

Raider claims to be a walking book of knowledge. Therefore, he SHOULD KNOW MY MUM'S NAME. >=]

The Lionhearted is the President of the special Lion World =D.

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Er.. not really. It's.. in the beginning. It's like the one of the first missions you do. >.>
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Er.. not really. It's.. in the beginning. It's like the one of the first missions you do. >.>
Well... It's still an unexpected surprise! LOL!
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Xeilie, the finest Peanut Butter in all the land, made with selected Peanuts, and a logo consisting of sitting ducks and deformed monkeys.

Unknown Entity is a buyer of our Peanut Butter. She's a luckeh lass!


Evenesca, our very own Planet, which is, the best Planet EVER.
It's ruled by Reno, and odd numbers are illegal there. Everybody has a Reno hairstyle and multi coloured skin.
It is ace.

Raider claims to be a walking book of knowledge. Therefore, he SHOULD KNOW MY MUM'S NAME. >=]

The Lionhearted is the President of the special Lion World =D.

My TFF Family:
Martin, Omega Weapon, Sour Sob, Xeim, Itachi Uchiha, Fishie, Rasler+, Rocky, Froggie, Please Smoke Up

PM me if you want to join ^^.


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My list as last night proved was far too offensive for mainstream society, all I have to say as a pissed co-creator is this...
My name is Martin J. Cullen. And I approve of these awards. And I deserve 69.3 no... 69.4% of them.


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and...yes, lulu says the word "pregnant" if i remember correctly (my dang bro stole the ps2 >_> im going through FF withdrawls)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ENIL
hey i finally thought of the story. okay here we go.
????: Listen to my story
Tidus: Yuna so who is this vegnagun?
Yuna: Vegnagun was the lost collosus hidden under the Bevelle underground.
Tidus: So Bevelle still contained it's secret's.

Yuna sighs with terror as afraid Tidus will be angry.

Yuna: Tidus there is something I must tell you,but promise you won't be mad.
Tidus: What do you mean Yuna can you expect me not to be mad if I don't know what you're going to ask me.
Yuna:Tidus I'm pregnant.

Tidus is amazed with the great news Yuna told him. Tidus tell Yuna they should go to the farplane to see Yunas family and Tidus' family so as they talk to Tromell now known as Lord Tromell Guado. The Guado launch a preemptive attack, now that they left Vegnagun in the Farplane Seymour wake's up from his slumber and his spirit joins Vegnagun, so as the Guado keeps attacking the Farplane Tidus and Yuna watched the commsphere left in the Farplane. The collosus which is now known as the final fantasy weapon summon's the 3 master terror titans.

Yuna: What is going on?
Tidus: I don't know but, Yuna we must tell Wakka and the other's. Who know's what this idiot is planning to do to Spira.
Yuna: Then we shall. As Yuna calls Rikku, Wakka, Lulu, Kimahri, Paine, the Gullwings.
Brother: Yuna what's your status?
Yuna: Trouble, and I mean big trouble.
Brother: I'm on my way.

This time Seymour found a way to morph aeons into the 3 terror titans which Seymour moved out of the farplane.



sorry couldn't finish the story but I will continue on it please tell me if you like it or if you want me to detail it.

Whoa!I liked it,dude.Keep on writing,you have a skill for it.
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Very good!!!! Think of posting that at fanfiction?????? (the web site)
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