DragonHeart's Writings

[DragonHeart]

Well, I was sorting through some of my older works and I thought I'd post some. These first ones are the few non-angsty poems I've written every now and then hehe. I might also retype a couple short stories or something, if I get the chance. I'd love to get feedback on these. ^^

Cat Nap

A black cat naps in the sun,
content upon his favorite rug,
the expression on his face
so profoundly smug

One wonders why he grins;
What secret does he keep
that would make him oh so
knowing, even in his sleep?

Dawn

The threads of Fate spin, interweaving
A dream once lost, now real, all unbelieving
The darkness of a wandering heart
Fades with dawn, the light impart

In the Wildwood

One fine morn in the wildwood,
I spied perched upon a bough
An old black bird who looked at
Me, and then he raised his brow.
He chortled in delight, and I
Suppose he fancied me, that
Young stranger who still dares
To walk beneath his tree.

I'm pretty sure I have revised drafts of these but I don't know where they went. >.< Oh well, I'll find 'em eventually.

So, what do you think?

~DragonHeart~

[Psiko]

First off, I love all your writing. You should know that by now.

HOWEVER!

I feel that you need to send these out IMMEDIATELY to be published. Seriously. Have you even tried sending them anywhere before? I know I would publish them if I had a magazine!

[DragonHeart]

No, I've never tried. Poetry is a lot harder to write well, and hence, get published. I'm embarrassed to even look at some of the old poems I wrote. Those three are among the few I actually don't mind. To be perfectly honest, In the Wildwood is probably my favorite piece of poetry I've ever written.

~DragonHeart~