Final Fantasy Zero

Lavtran City, Sathell Continent

It's been a year now..
Time passes by so quickly; it feels just like yesterday when I woke up with headache in this beautiful garden next to a glorious castle, I thought it was paradise, until...

Bang!!!

Something hit me from behind, someone throw something at me, i look back, and I see a bunch of people running towards me, a chef, few maids, and some guards. I don't wait to get beaten by them, so I just run as fast as I can.
But it happens that I see something very shiny on one of the castle's balcony, it’s a pendant of a very beautiful girl, she doesn’t seem to notice the chaos down here, she just gaze upon the blue sky, like she is waiting for something.
Bump!!!

I hit something... OMG, this guy is huge, with his shiny armor made of steel, he carries the biggest sword I’ve ever seen in his back, he grabs my arm, and I can't run anymore. Commander !! Said those guards after me, the chef and maid are still way behind.

Commander : "how the hell is this brat able to get in here?"
Guard 1 : "I’m so sorry sir, we're already guarding the whole Castle so that no one may get in."
Commander "yeah, right.."
Guards : "......................"
Commander : " listen boy, you're lucky that I have some important business to do right now, so you can hit the road in one piece.. But next time I see you in this perimeter, you’re gonna be my sandbag!"
Me : "I got your point"

He let go of me, and I just jump over the fence and rush inside the city

To be continued

Do you like this opening??

I will try to show some ilustration of characters next time, along with my story

[Caije]

Hmm, Its good but I'd turn it into a third person story. Put your name in and dont say I said, I ran and so on so forth. Please write more though.