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Old 07-13-2006, 05:27 PM Level: 19  HP: 47 / 471
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Absurdity

Any critique would be nice on flow/content/anything.

If a will o' the wisp
were to speak with a lisp,
would it make any sense to you?

Or would a haze in your sight,
talking, fill you with fright,
and send your heart fleeting in two?

Would you be afraid
at the sight of a jade
figurine nought but singing a song?

Would you be more content;
to be delerium sent;
to sing to yourself all night long?

Now all these to me
are not things I see
every day out on my front lawn.

But I'll tell you right now
that I see a cow
dancing the jitterbug with a young fawn.

Can you only imagine
a horse in a wagon
whipping a human to pull it along?

Or does this seem absurd
like a man-eating bird,
or does that to you just seem wrong?

There's no reason to me
why all this should be
considered to be only folly.

So what about you;
do you agree with me, too,
or do you need a ride on my trolley?

I think I have proved,
though you do not seem moved,
that all in our minds can we see.

And if you don't concur,
I must tell you, sir;
that you look just crazy to me.
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Testy are we? Sit down to some nice music and relax. - Momo Mastermind

Emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo, emo!! - Nin'

Man, you emo! ^_^ - Nin'

You're an idiot and need to grow up

you're probably the biggest emo I've seen. Shut up and actually try to hold a thought.

I can only assume the last two are also Nin'.

What the hell is the theme with calling me emo and telling me I need to grow up? You people are retarded.
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