Poetry by Psiko (Warning: May become rather large!)

[Psiko]

In the interest of fairness, allow me to post a poem up for criticism. Be as harsh as you would like, I welcome it all. Just be able to back up the criticism with solid examples within the poem itself. ^^;;

Deep Reflections


Warmth radiates from a glowing mass;
Crackling, flickering, growing.
Engulfing twigs and leaves with flaming fingers,
Lashing out with a fiery tongue,
Spitting tiny embers all around.
Staring into the orange and yellow light
Calmly dancing around its confined home;
Thin trails of smoke traveling through the sky
As the raging flame consumes its fuel.
Gazing into the fiery depths of the fire
Memories of events long gone
Come flooding back into your mind
As you lose yourself to the past
While you watch the flickering flame.

[DragonHeart]

I remember reading that poem a long time ago bro, and it's still one of my favorites from you. ^^ Do you still have your site up? I lost the link when I switched comps. I hope you update it if you do or this thread if you don't, I'd love to see your newest work.

~DragonHeart~