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Old 12-09-2005, 02:31 PM Level: -INF  HP: NAN / -INF
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No One Else Could Ever Hold Me So - A one shot surrounding Garnet and Zidane

Why did you have to go? No one else could ever hold me so. Why did you have to leave? Now I just don't believe...

" My lady, are you alright? We missed you at dinner." Beatrix says quietly, squeezing Garnet's shoulder. Garnet turns around and smiles at Beatrix.
" It's nothing. I just miss him so much." Garnet mutters, hugging Beatrix and crying into her shoulder. Beatrix frowns as she remembers that day.


" Beatrix, Steiner, get Garnet out of here, NOW!" Zidane yelled. Beatrix turns around just in time to see the dragons claws speeding towards her. She backpedals and motioned Steiner over. Steiner ran over to her and picked up Queen Garnet. Queen Garnet had cried out as she saw Blank and Zidane tumbling over the edge of the cliff, along with the dragon into the dark abyss below.

Beatrix cries silenty, holding Garnet close. General Steiner walks in and walks over slowly.
" My ladies, what has befallen here?" Steiner asks, saluting Garnet. Garnet and Beatrix wipe their eyes.
" Nothing, Steiner. Return to your post." Garnet says, motioning him away.
" Very well, my lady." Steiner mutters. He saluts and exit. A door slams in the neighboring hallway and immediatly swords are drawn. Two men in tattered clothing stumble in, but somehow make it to the Queens bed and kneel.
" To my charming lady, Dagger, I bestow upon you, Zidane Tribal." The blonde man says. He stands up and Garnet screams. Zidane was standing there, smiling broadly and crying slightly. The red head man stands up also, revealing himself as Blank.
" Zidane! Zidane, Zidane, Zidane..." Garnet cries, hugging him close and crying. Zidane holds her back and strokes her hair. Blank, Steiner and Beatrix look at each other and smile.
" No one could ever hold me so." Zidane mutters. Garnet smiles at him and kisses him. She lets go off him and he holds her tighter.
" Zidane Tribal, I love you." Garnet says. Zidane kisses her again.
" I love you to, Queen Garnet, my shining Dagger..." Zidane mutters.



 
 
 
Old 12-19-2005, 04:38 PM Level: -INF  HP: NAN / -INF
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It's a decent start. A bit short for my tastes though. Were you planning on putting in additional chapters, or just writing a short piece?



 
 
 
Old 12-20-2005, 04:48 PM Level: 20  HP: 41 / 476
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Sounds good.I like it so far.Are you planing on writing more?
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Old 12-27-2005, 05:57 AM Level: -INF  HP: NAN / -INF
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Nah, It was a one shot. I'll add more later, maybe.



 
 
 

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