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Old 05-29-2006, 01:17 AM Level: 11  HP: 7 / 251
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I like it! :D

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...wesomeness.png

critism please?
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Old 05-30-2006, 10:11 AM Level: 15  HP: 18 / 364
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If you made it yourself, chapeau (hats off in French).

Personally I'd add some color and maybe give it a real theme.
Looks so plane to me.

Try to make it more smooth/smoky if you know w.i.m.


like it though
just not my kind of thing
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Old 05-30-2006, 11:02 AM Level: 59  HP: 1467 / 1467
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It's pretty good. I've worked with shots of eyes in tags before, and they can be pretty easy to do. Like RagnaToad, I think you should add a little colour.

I made a tag with eyes from Silent Hill 4's "Eileen Galvin". I made the colours lesser, but included scratches in her face as well as bloody eyes. A little colour can go a long, long way.

Other then that, it's pretty good.
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Old 05-30-2006, 11:39 AM Level: 17  HP: 19 / 424
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*ahem.

What I suggest, it removing some of that effect from Kadaj's [Correct me if I'm wrong on that one] face, so it only hits the places where the focus doesn't matter, like the shadows of his face and remove the effect from his eyes and where the light hits his face. Also, maybe try keeping the no saturation, but adding colour to his eye's only. Like green eye against that background, can be effective if done right. Also, if you're going to add text, try not to take the main focus away from Kadaj if you're wanting him as the main focus point on this tag. I suggest some plain text in the bottm left, not to showy, so that people can divert to that once finished looking at kadaj's eyes. Also, a little tip for borders, make a 2 pixel thick, black border, then take a light colour from a part of your tag, and then make a light 1 pixel thick outer border to really make it stand out a bit more. A little work on this piece and it can go quite far.
If this is 1 of your first attempts at making something, kudo's kid.
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Old 05-30-2006, 11:52 PM Level: 11  HP: 7 / 251
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yeah its kadaj! ;p
and yeah, i havent finished it yet.. i was going to add colour to his eye. (and eye only..
the boarder thing, i'll try..
and i dont know what you mean by the effect thing.. ;p

also.. no its not my first attmept, i make stuff every now and hten... this is the first time i've made something in about 2-3 months tho..
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