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Yay, I finally gathered up the courage to post some of my poetry on here, whoots! Well this is my first poem on here so don't be too cruel. heh heh Betrayal As I sit and contemplate my pain The depth and span of this stain My understanding is on the balance of fate And I recognize this won’t abate It came out of the abyss with arresting speed And with untainted accuracy accomplished its deed Betrayal is no new thing The unforeseen and trying sting No this isn’t something new But this was not like last, a purer brew My closest companion The one I never considered to examine How could it be true The one I trusted above all, the one I thought I knew I must now search my soul To see how greatly my cohort stole But how can you measure The entry I lost, pleasure I know it isn’t out of spite Ignorant of abandonment’s might But the true architect of this ache The one I have learned to hate Love is the only creature That could devise such discomfort with ease and leisure With my confidence fading Gradually and persistently slipping into hating The only consistent my hurt With my very soul detached and burnt I continue my journey through living death With betrayal my only friend left | ||||||||||||||
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| ☠Breaker☠ Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: In A Dark Time The Eye Begins To See
| You did a good job Lady Rika. The title of your poem, Betrayal says it all in the poem. it sounds like someone has been through so much in their life and now it seem like they have nobody, but themselves. Am I right? You did a great job and I can't wait to see more of your poetry. ![]() | ||||||||||||
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| | Level: 17 | HP: 26 / 418 |
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| Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Kentucky
Inventory | Thank you for responding, I love Criticism(good or bad) and i'll continue to post more since theirs nothing else to do, ^_^ | ||||||||||||
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