![]() |
| |||||||
| Cleft of Dimension Here you can view old classic threads, including: fanfics, pics, and great topics. |
| | LinkBack | Thread Tools | Display Modes |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #1 (permalink) | ||
| |
I had exactly one hour to do this, wasn't allowed to use a rubber, thought id challenge myself. Its pretty crap, and I'm not happy with it =/ drew it with no picture or anything to copy from either. http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j2...ulutime1hr.jpg
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 7 | HP: 2 / 169 |
| EXP: 77% |
| ![]() | #2 (permalink) | ||
| |
It looks good, my suggestions (I am a big art person) Work on the face, have it have a Lulu touch. It is kind of. . . I don't know. I suggest you just fix the face, otherwise, the body is fanastic and the hair!!
__________________ <img src="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r186/lytto_smiles/Tiki.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting"> You can thank Viera for my so odd siggie. She makes awesome ones. | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #3 (permalink) | ||
| | Thanks, i tried it two more times...here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32298025/ Third go http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31813316/ Second go I REALLY hate my second shot at this.
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 7 | HP: 2 / 169 |
| EXP: 77% |
| ![]() | #5 (permalink) | ||
| | Hey. I'm here again! Okay, well, the face is still, it has something wrong... I think it's the nose. The eyes are too slanted... make the top lip of the mouth a little bigger in the middle. (Sorry, really am, if I'm bothering you) Becuause your drawings are really a piece of work! Your great at drawing bodies.
__________________ <img src="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r186/lytto_smiles/Tiki.png" border="0" alt="Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting"> You can thank Viera for my so odd siggie. She makes awesome ones. | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #6 (permalink) | ||
| | Heh, no its fine! Thanks, I know, I try and try and try but never can seem to get the face how I want it. Its really...I dunno. I just can't do faces. =/ Thanks for your comments.
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 23 | HP: 61 / 558 |
| EXP: 33% |
| ![]() | #7 (permalink) | ||
| Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Davao City,Philippines
Posts
655 |
*Oh nice work...its not bad if you say you didnt use erasers and didnt copy from anything.practice more to inprove ok! draw more,improve more and post more right!YEAH!***HALLER BACK!!!*** | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #8 (permalink) | ||
| | Thanks alot. I intend on having more tries etc, on different stuff.
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #10 (permalink) | ||
| | All three? I think my third attempt was best because I shaded it in. I just can NEVER get faces right even though I spent half a year at school, and another half a year out of school practicing proportions and stuff.
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 8 | HP: 3 / 190 |
| EXP: 62% |
| ![]() | #11 (permalink) | ||
| | Faces are a right pain to draw. I always have to have some sort of reference when drawing faces, whether it's a picture, or a person sat next to me or something. I won't comment on the first two attempts, but the third attempt. It's not entirely bad. I've seen worse, but I've seen much better too. It looks fine from the shoulders down. The head is too out of proportion compared to the rest of the body, and the positioning and shape of the neck and shoulder is waaay off. If you wanna do fan art, I suggest you take reference from other images. Work more on getting the head, neck and shoulders looking right and your drawings will look far more better. ![]() | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 30 | HP: 204 / 748 |
| EXP: 92% |
| ![]() | #13 (permalink) | ||
| Vampiric Delirium | really great!! the body's excellent...you have real talent! i liked the second one best
__________________ Soulmate to Prodigal Madness Down with word games. Eradicate post counts. Lily says - OldBean is into owl buttsecks. Lily also says - I want to eat David Tennant. The lungs fill with fluid and are slowly wrapped in a cancerous membrane that grows like a thin sheet. Breathing becomes harder and increasingly painful. Eventually the lungs can no longer function and the person dies. | ||||||||
| | Warnings: 2 Warning level: 68 | ||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
![]() | ![]() |
| | Level: 16 | HP: 21 / 399 |
| EXP: 99% |
| ![]() | #14 (permalink) | ||
| | Thank you, you mean the darker more shaded one? +0bl!v!oN+, Thanks, ^__^, I just need to keep practicing. ^__^ Was hell without a rubber though. Ive done alot more fan art, just mooch around my DA if you wanna see. ^__^
__________________ <a href="http://imageshack.us"><img src="http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8864/ldsigiftvs8rd9.jpg" border="0" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /></a> www.s6.invisionfree.com/fftalk Please join my forum al_bhed_psycho - My big Sister Valentine89 - My toast twin | ||||||||
| | |||||||||
![]() | ![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) | |
| Thread Tools | |