Challenge- Will anyone respond

[~WP-Night]

"Hmm", he said kindly as they flew into the setting sun, in each others arms.

[LocoColt04]

OOC: It looks to me like this is the end of your battle. If it isn't, feel free to send me a message stating otherwise, and I will re-open the thread. Now, I know I suggested you read the guidelines here... but it seems you missed the one regarding incredibly short posts. In the future, I'd like to see you put some more effort into your posts. Make them longer, more descriptive. Most of the time, I had no idea how to visualize anything Zack was doing. Though you're very straightforward with your character's motions, you leave way too much to the imagination. That goes for Aney as well. Try being more descriptive in the future. Just a little friendly advice, since this seems to have reached its end.