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03-07-2006, 03:39 AM
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By now I wrote quite some stuff and have posted most of it here on TFF. After a while, when they get older then a month, they 'vanish' making it seem they never existed. Well, they still do, and here is a list of them here on TFF: - The Chronicles of Inferno Mage - Valentine Works I ~ Maxim's Letter - Valentine Works II ~ Sylvio's Sonnet - Valentine Works III ~ The Princess' Quest - White Version - The Princess' Quest - Black Version - Valentine Works IV ~ Daedalus' Letter - El Silenzio - The Journey - The Journey II - The Wild Rose - Mind of a Madman - Mind of a Madman II - Battle Anthem - The Power of a Smile ~ Remastered - The Rogue - I Believe - The Hero - The King - The Queen - The General - The Poet - Black Light - The Writings on The Wall - The Writings on The Wall II - The Person I Truly Am - This Feeling Inside - I Can Fly - Torture (NEW!!) - Poem #24 (NEW!!) - The Final Hour - Black Version (NEW!!) - The Final Hour - White Version (NEW!!) - Rust (NEW!!) - Pax (NEW!!) --- Feel free to critisise them, and if you want to do so, do that here. It might turn out to be a good thing, those critiques  Also, I'd like to check out other's work as well, so if you think you've got something nice to show me, please do so.Last edited by King Fenii; 10-05-2007 at 08:50 AM. | ||||||||
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03-07-2006, 06:13 AM
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463 | the chronicles are coming along nicely, but i like the sound of the wild rose... keep it up my friend!
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05-21-2006, 03:59 PM
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1,011 | Updated the list and added the 2 new pieces. The main reason for the update is not to let the other pieces go to vain... Read through some of my pieces if you're up for it, and feel free to comment them. I'm always open for them  | ||||||||
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05-21-2006, 04:17 PM
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n/a | I really like the mind of a madman. But isn't the mind of a madman complex,madmen are usually geniuses who just can't seem to find a place for them in today's society? And wich person did you used for inspiration?  | ||||||||
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05-23-2006, 11:48 AM
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1,011 | Well, madmen aren't necessarily always complex. With Mind of a Madman I simply put an accent how people interpret different people. People can just be misunderstood and that's why they might be seen as mad. Hope that answers your question. Who did I use for inspiration...well, not myself anyway. I don't know, never really thought about that. I just heard it in a song once. | ||||||||
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06-18-2006, 07:48 PM
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936 | Ohhh I love"The rogue".It is very well written,you use imagery in a wonderful way,you also use great words.
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05-04-2007, 05:34 AM
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1,011 | Well, I've updated the list and added 11 new pieces. I recommend checking them out, and if you're up for it, leave a comment here as well, I really like it when people tell me what they think about my work. So, have fun reading ^^ | ||||||||
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05-07-2007, 08:33 PM
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2,899  | I've started reading through your new poetry, and I've noticed they all have something in common: forced rhyme. It stands out because of the strange phrasing or word choices you have to make in order to make it conform to your pattern. In my opinion your work would be much stronger if you let it flow instead of limiting it to any single form. ~DragonHeart~
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10-08-2007, 10:20 AM
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2,899 | I read over the new postings and I still have the same opinion as before. I must admit I'm perplexed as to why you continually use the exact same form for everything, no matter how strange or irrelevant the wording has to be to accomplish it. My intent isn't to be harsh, I just feel your work could be so much stronger if you gave yourself room to work out of the proverbial box. ~DragonHeart~
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