Testbug's Trial

[Anomaly]

I teach the same way I was taught by my Master, Ryu, and I've taught many using this technique. What you must realize is that in order to battle perfectly you must tell a story. Not necissarily an elaborate one, as this is for fun, but its good to try and avoid simple 'I attack you and you attack me' exchanges. You and your enemy must weave a story in an elaborate dance, including background as well as forground.

Here's the critiria

Introduce yourself - Make an intro post. I'll give an example post and then you follow. Be sure to acknowledge my challenge.

then-
physical attack/defense
magic attack/defense (if you don't have magic its still a good idea to lern how to defend against, negate, or at least evade spells)
special tech
summons (while summons aren't popular on this site, they are still allowed. you may find yourself fighting a summoner at some point in the future so it would be good to be prepared)
Overdrive
Wrap up
Ending It

Generally I won't move on from one of these criteria until I feel you've sufficently grasped the concept if not the technique. Having said which, you only ever have one chance at introduction, so make it a good one. I won't fight you for real until we get to the wrapping up stage, so don;t worry about being overpowered early on.

Be sure to PM me if you have any questions. Now...shall we?

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Lightning flashed, silently, unvieling the countryside in a bright, strobe like, flash that quickly flees back into pitch darkness. The only real sound is the endless hiss of falling rain, pouring in sheets. Through the flashes, a massive field can be made out...wheat...or possibley corn, a run down farmhouse the only sign of humanity in the ditance. A strange scarecrow stands in the midst of the fields in the swirling rain. It doesn't move quiet right as the wind whips around the drenching rains. With the next lightning flash it is easily seen why...the winds themselves do not touch the figure.

Churned into muck, the earth glistens with a soft squishing sound as it is churned slowly around the scarecrows feet. Cloaked from shoulder down in a dark chainlink trench-cloak, its shroud doesn't even twitch as the rain seems to be pressed back in a widening sphere of crackling darkness. White hair in spikes and curving strands move gently in the darkness. Suddenly, two white hot points of light ignite on the figures shadowed face. Glowing as stars in a black abyss of nothingness, the two eyes seem focused on the distant horizon. Any illusion that this is a scarecrow is completely dispressed in the next barrage of lightning flashes that seem to last for ages.

Slowly a black taloned hand seperates itself from the rest of the darkness and reaches between two out streatched raven black wings. A crimson light ignites all along the figures arm and seems to spread between the wings. A thin hiss as of steam mingles with the wind as the rain is more rapidly pressed back in a wide circle of cleared fields...the crops bent backwards by a field of gravitation flux. The taloned hand rests on a massive kris bladed sword that slides from between the Legendary Dragon Knights shoulder blades. He clasps the hilt of the weapon gently, familiarly, as if he had only sought to check that the Blood Reaver was indeed still present...though the sentiant soul of the blade would notify him instantly should they ever part.

The very clouds above peel back, unvieling a starry sky dominated by the glow of an almost crimson watery moon that now lights the circle of calm...lightning raging all around the horizon. The light glints off a silver gauntlet upon the left arm, as well as an ankh suspended by a chain around the figures neck. A similar ankh, etched into the figures forehead, lights up with some strange inner light that soon fades away. Black lips crack open upon the pale face, twisting into a cruel rictus of a smile, revealing a mouth filled with razor sharp fangs. The voice is the merest whisper but none the less it seems to echo in the enchanted void. "Come...you skulk their in the pouring rain. Even through its drowning scent the Reaver can smell your racing blood. Why not dry off a bit before you are beaten into a bloody pulp?"
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It's important to note that when you are making a challenge yourself you will be the one outlining the enviroment. It's always good to describe the enviroment in detail but one does not have to be OVERTLY precise...leave a little room for creativety on your opponents part. If you are fighting a specific opponent, its not always a good idea to pick enviroments that would give you an advantage or them a disadvantage, but it IS something to keep in mind for later battles.

Probably the most important advice I can give you at this stage is to always remember that no matter how much you know about a persons character from reading their profile, REMEMBER, if it is your first battle with this person YOUR character will know nothing about them other than what they are TOLD or what of their powers are revealed in battle. It's ok to 'sense power', but its a good idea not to be overtly specific in the nature of that power.

It's also advisable to keep a degree of healthy respect for your opponent, no matter how much you may abhor them as a person or their character. For that reason I will ask that you exclude any posts that detail actions by my character or words my character says other than what I have already posted. I consider it godmodding...not everyone does but thats just how I teach. I find it saves a lot of hassle.

Now, please introduce your character.

[Testbug]

Sorry, that I haven't have time to answer to this RPB match. My computer have been broken many times and and last I get it work almost perfect. I don't have good imagination but here is my answer to this match that we get it started.

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Suddenly wind started blowing harder and harder. Mysterios man came behind the tree in order tthat he colud see his enemy and his enemy colud see him. He stand in next to tree about 30 seconds and then it happen. Lightinig from to sky hit the tree and the tree started burning.

Mysterios mans shape came to seeing. He didn't react about that tree next to him strated burning. He just standed there. Because wind was strong, his long, blond hair and navy blue cape flutter in th air. Fire of tree lighted his clothes.

He had navy blue, light training suit. In this training suit there was three pictures: one in his right chest, second in his back and third one in his right leg.

They all was from the same picture but different size. Picture present flame that burned in the tree and man next to the tree. Man looked like he have come there without any weapons but if you watched closely, you saw that he have small claws in his hands. This man doesn't need weapons, he is a weapon.

When the tree started burning harder, his face come to visible. He have many scars on his face. Couple from his childhood and rest after he join Revengers that readed under logo that was in his back. "i'm not going to get beated before you die. I'm going to revnge that what you did to my family", he shouted from his wounded lips. He didn't have happy face, he aws angry.

He removed his eyemask and released his hair that it could flutter freely in the air. His eyes was red and in his eyes burn flaming hatred. He started waliking toward his enemy. When he walked forward with every step ,every point that his feet touched started burning.

Rain started to end and sun started shining between clouds. Clouds and wind didn't go away but atmosphere were much warmer. Tree also started excitinguished because this mysterios man started be away from the tree.
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I wasn't sure was that Blood Reaver weapon or name to your character. I also didn't tell my character name because I don't have good imagination. If you invent name to my character, be free and tell it some day.

[Anomaly]

...First off, nice to see your still able ot participate. Second, even though its certainly to my forte either, you made some obvious spelling and gramatical errors that are abit too glaring. It is unfortunate, but the ability to be understood is extremely important in battle, and as I such I suggest you use a spelling and grammar checker on what you type before you post it in a serious battle. As this is just training and I'd be a hypocryte if I held you in disdain for it, I will overlook it for now. I merely ask if you have made a Character Statistic entry for this character and if you ould provide a link.

That he doesn't have a name, however, tells me pretty much all I need to know. We'll work on your character profile but first lets go over your post.

You made your intro, established a reason for wanting to fight, and gave a brief description of your character and hinted at his fighting style and powers. These are all good things. The negatives are repetition...you repeated the imagery of hair and cape blowing in the wind and the burning of the tree a little too often. Don't be afraid to branch out to describe other things. You're new to this...thats ok.

However, what IS unacceptable, that I have seen is your apprent inatentiveness to your enemy. Your enemies posts are in fact MORE IMPORTANT TO YOUR VICTORY THAN YOUR OWN. you must be constantly aware of every little change, every factor, you must study all the information the enemy offers. The Blood Reaver is the name of my sword. If you need a link to my characters stats I can provide one. Also note that in my initial post I ALSO said the clouds peeled back to reveal it was night (stars out, a watery crimson moon, you follow?) not day time.

While its good that you branched out to talk about the changing enviroment, it is vital to maintain plot continuity in battle. Though RPB focuses on combat, one should not sacrifice sensibility for its sake. Keep that in mind in your next post. If you could, draw up a rough Charcter stat sheet for your character. I'll draw up one of what I've observed so far, and you can fill in the blanks.

Name: 'unknown'
Age: appears young
Appearnce: clothed in blue with a blue cape, red eyes, and long blond hair
Personality: a Firey young man seeking vengence for his family
Weapon/s: Claws
Armor: 'unknown'
Magics: Fire

Now, for the most part your introduction is passable. However, I hope you will strive to make a better effort in your next post. Will now respond to your character and make a physical attack.
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The storm boils only on the horizon now, as the two glare at one another. The Anomalist did not know, or at least did not remember this boy or his family. As it was, however, he wasn't all that suprised. It was common occurance for complete strangers to track him down, blaming him for the death of someone he wasn't even aware he had killed. But then life was so wretchedly fragile...any little thing could snuff it out.

This one appeared incensed...his rage leaked out in a magical sense. Flames of hatred and indignation scortched the very earth and a rather unfortunate tree. Fire elementals...all the young ones were always fire elementals. It never failed to amaze the Anomalist just how incredibley unimaginative people could be. But then the flame was a rather gruesome way to go as well as a helpful element...it seemed hopelessly enshrined in human imagination as a thing of wonder. Strange indeed for creatures born of the earth.

Switching his grip on his blade, and hefting it forwards, Anomaly smiles.

"Vengeance is it that you desire, oh firey one? Well that is something I'm quite familar with. I'd say I would aid you in quenching your thirst for it, but if it would take my blood to abate it then I'm afraid you will have to fight for every mouthful!"

His apprent self-ceclared enemy continues forward. On the horizon, the storm grows feircer. What had caused it to be driven back so thoroughly? Was it the burning spirit of this man clad in blue...or was it something else. The Blood Reaver, the cruel kris blade clenched in Anomaly's fist, gives a low, soft growl...the same noise you'd expect from a beast drunk with battle lust.

"Blood...yes. If you want it, lets see if you can take it half as well as my blade!"

In an instant, the gap between the Anomalist and the blue clad male was eliminated. A swath of churned earth exploded in Anomaly's wake, the after effects of his sudden burst of speed. A crimson arc is traced in that wake as well, marking the path of the kris blade...the sword is swung in a beautiful arc, aimed to slash through the newcomers middle...arms, chest, and all.
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Now then, as for your reply, here's what I want to see. The attack is a standard horizontal slash. It can be dodged by ducking or by jumping high enough, and it is possible to block if you have sufficent armor and can absourb the blow. I want to see a physical block or dodge anda physical counter attack. NO MAGIC or any special skills yet...I wish to gauge your physcial abilities only. If your character is mostly a magic user then a weak physicallity should be reflected, though a grace of movement would be acceptable.

Whatever you decide, I do want a physcial counter attack...put those claws to good use, and REMEMBER. It is not you that decides if your blows hit, it is your enemy. Do not take control of another persons character, their reactions, or say what does and does not effect them. I'll take care of that end for my character as you do on your end for yours.

[Testbug]

Sorry, Anomaly that my posting take time. I print your post, then I write my own post on paper, then I write it on Wordpad and last I post it. You get my post toworrow. I have make stats to my character, check if you want...

Name: Lorien "Starbreeze" Silvara
Age: 18-20
Appearnce: Navy blue training suit with navy blue cape; red eyes; long, blond hair; about 6 feet tall; scars on face
Personality: A firey young man seeking vengence for his family. Don't fight without good reason. Defend people who are weaker than he and fight only if he have to.
Weapon/s: Paladin claws
Armor: Mythril in his training suit; absords Fire, Ice and Water
Magics: Fire, Barrier, M-Barrier, Haste, Cure

[Testbug]

Alrighty my mates. I answer now to this battle but I tell me comments first about your criticism.

Yes, I know that my spelling and grammar isn't very good. I try to get that checker somewhere. If I don't find, can you sen me a link where I can get one. (Finnish-English-Finnish; I'm from Finland, you know) But till then you have to try read my post.

From my last post : I told you at beginning of that I don't have good imagination. I saw it myself that the last post has lot of repetition. Sorry about that.

I know that enemies post are more important than my owns, that what my chacarter said was just presenting. You don't have to care everything that my character say. And about that daytime, I read fast so I miss half of my reading. (I read your post two times and now when I read it third time I saw what daytime was) Again, sorry.

You have now my character basics. If you know how to make it better just tell me.

And now to the battle...

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But it missed, almost.

Lorien dodged this powerful strike by making somersault to back but Anomalys Blood Reaver was too fast and hitted Lorien to the legs. Blood flyed all over the field and Loriens legs werw all over in blood that bleeded from his legs. His mythril suit didn't ensure Anomalys strike. His drousers had change to shorts and it were turned red from the blood. Lorien started feel pain from his legs. He couldn't take even step.

Anomaly just smile. "You think that I'm going to get beated this fast! No way in hell!". Lorien put his hands on wounds and screamed "Aah!". Loriens wounds were burn and they were closed. His legs were red from the heat, not blood. Lorien get up from the ground and take battlepose.

He was now more angry. Lorien didn't waste time and started running toward Anomaly. Just before crashing to Anomaly, Lorien staretd sliding and slide under Anomalys feet. Lorien jumped to the air behind Anomaly and lift his right to attack...

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[Anomaly]

I wish I could help you with that translator, I really do, but all I have are the engines for more mainstream languages.

Still, I have to compliment you on your character profile. It's not bad for a first try. It's scant but there's plenty of room to grow, and thats the important thing.

Now, about your post...

The first sentence is uneccisary. Removed from the following paragraph as it is and as short as it is, it serves no real purpose. Further, it actually seems to contradict the following paragraph as it is clear from the bleeding that it was not a miss at all, but a hit. Now had you said 'It almost missed, but instead etc.' and had it be a part of the main paragraph that would've made more sense and added to the rest of the battle.

Now though the rest of the paragraph is a little choppy and repetative, you DID do as required and make a physical dodge.

My main problem comes later, in the next paragraph in which you state that 'Anomaly just smiled'. Now, most people wouldn't have a problem with that, but my style of RPing requires thast one never take over another characters actions. Even something as simple as a smile is godmodding to me...for how do you know if my character would smile or not? Please refrain from such actions in the future.

I do like the firey dialogue though, and you are keeping well in character. I'm also quite impressed how you used your flame magics to caurtarize your wounds. A wise move when facing an opponent who weilds a blood drinking blade. Also an unorthodox use of your skill...I think we can move onto magic testing now.

One last suggestion...instead of constantly refering to my character as 'Anomaly' try to come up with a more descriptive way of referencing him. Such as 'the dark clad one' or even simpley 'the enemy'...it makes your posts less repetative.
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The Blood Reaver exults in the fresh taste of blood, drinking in every drop that touches the blade and swallowing up those fragments that fall ot the earth. A cruel smile twists the Anomalists smile as the young fire brand gives voice to his defiance followed swiftly by a cry of agony. Yet it is not pain from the wound as the Anomalist expects, but rather the pain of the flames that this man commands. It is a use of power to be respected.

As such, it was with little suprise that he observed the young man rushing towards him, faster this time. Falling into a slide, it seemed he would attempt to get in a back attack. With a sound very much like a parachute filling with air, a pair of beautiful, raven black wings spread upon the Anomalists back. He rises into the air, clear of the young mans assault, and pivots...a darkling thing bourn on the winds of the night.

"If I HAD crushed you so swiftly, I must say I would've been massively disappointed. I mean I know you're just a worm, but even worms should have a LITTLE fight in them before they're ground beneath the heel of the strong."

Black lightning, thick and horrible laces its way down the Anomalist left arm as he lifts his gleaming silver gauntlet into the night sky. A crimson red eye opens in his palm...the Eye of Kolobos...a condute to focus the powerful energies at the beck and call of the astromancer. The black bolts, gravitational energy, syphon inot a point before the jeweled 'eye' and swell into an ebon sphere. It grows to about the size of a mans head, crackling with energy, before the Anomalist sends it hurtling down at the young man.

It is a simple spell, one composed of negative forces that will either smash the blue clad one into the earth, or shake the ground neath the mans feet if he should dodge. Either way, Anomaly prepares another gravitational spell in the mean time.

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The next part is simple...dodge the spell or take the damage, whatever you feel like doing. Then follow it with an offensive spell of your own. Show me your skill with the flame.

[Testbug]

Sorry about that 'godmodding' thing. I hoped that you won't get mad about that but sorry again.

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Lorien saw thatthis dark clad one wasn't so easy to win. It's going to be harder than he tought. "I didn't know that you have wings. Why didn't you tell me. This isn't fair. You have, I don't." Lorien sayed loud. "How this happen? How that is possible?" Lorien thinked and try to get out of this situtation.

Lorien watched behind and saw that there wasn't anything behind him. Bolt came closer and closer and at last he knew how to get out.

Lorien started casting M-Barrier for strong magic attacks. He have specialized to fire and defend magic but he have also study Holy magic. M-Barrier was came in front og him to stop this attack but he was sure that it wouldn't be enought. Lorien started add his Holy magic to M-Barrier. And then the Bolt hitted. Straight to Holy m-Barrier.

Lorien started sliding backwards till Bolts energy was empty. And 'puff', M-Barrier broke to thousends of pieces. "Is it my turn now?" Lorien shouted that his enemy would here. Lorien started running toward his enemy and started his turn. "HASTE" and his speed turned incredible and then he jumped, hitted his hand together and shouted "FLARE" and massive fire ball started flying toward his enemy.
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Your turn and comments.

[Anomaly]

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"You profess to seek vengeance upon me and you do not even know my nature!? Pitiful soul, I believe you've made a GRAVE error this night."

The demi spell smashes into an invisible shield just before it impacts the young man. The energy dispersal is rleative to the barriers strength...cutting the power of the black hole in half. A spell follows swiflty on its heels, Holy in nature. While Holy magic is essentially useless against gravity, the two spells expend themselves upon contact. Had the MBarrier not already taken its toll, the spell would've still been succesful.

Even so, if this was the extent of the young mans magical strength then he was in for a rough time indeed. Anomaly hovers in place, dark energies coiling about his form, as his enemy casts a spell of Haste followed swiflty by a spell of Flare. Ahh, Flare...the pinnicle of the fire magicians craft. Burning so hot it transcends the fire element and takes on none elemental properties if the magician is strong enough. Still, at the end of the day, it is only energy.

Anomaly extends his left hand, and the Eye of Kolobos opens. As the Flare spell nears its individual particals are sucked into the pupil of the eye. Anomaly's arm quivers with the effort of the absourbtion of such a spell, yet its over in the merest of seconds. A scortching light plays across the jeweled eye, and then the Flare spell is redirected back at its own caster.

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As I thought...you're more comprehensive with magic, aren't you? I suppose it is easier to write for magic than it is for direct combat. Cause and effect are easier to read due to the fact that the 'cause' is always simply 'magic'.

You can see that what I have done is not magic...the cause is simpley a special technique associated with one of my armaments. Special techniques are valuable, in that they do not conform to conventional rules as physical attacks and magical attacks must. A purely physical attack can be blocked in most instances, as can a purely magical attack if the character is capable. Special Techniques need not be so direct, though they CAN be if that is what you choose.

Special Techs can range from anything such as Chi, or spiritual energy based attacks to special talents that dwell within the characters weapons or armor. If you wish to design a special technique, PM me and we can discuss making one for your character. If not, it is still a good idea ot familiarize yourself with this concept. Even if you don't use special techs your enemy might employ them, and in such instances you must be prepaired to think quickly about how to deal with such a situation.

Here again the importance of reading your enemies character statisitcs is underlined. I would like to see how you will dealwith what just happened. If you aren't going to use special techs then I leave it open to you how you will deal with this scenerio...physcial and magical maneuvers are open to you.

And don't worry about the previous 'godmodding' thing. This is training, this is where we catch such errors. Though you're still making grammatical and spelling errors, your writing itself seems much more confident. In fact I think thats the most you've written since your intro.

My only real suggestion for you is to describe your spells in greater detail. If I did not myself know the power of a Flare spell, I would assume from your description that it was just a little fireball, easily deflected and ignored. It's alright to call out the name of your spell, but devote some more lines to the actual composition and level of power of the spell.

[Testbug]

Well, time to continue...I also edited my character statics. Those what are bolded are new things in it...

Here:

Name: Lorien Silvara
Age: 18-20
Race: Human/Angel
Class: Master/Dragoon
Appearnce: Navy blue training suit with navy blue cape; red eyes; long, blond hair; about 6 feet tall; scars on face
Personality: A firey young man seeking vengence for his family. Don't fight without good reason. Defend people who are weaker than he and fight only if he have to.
Weapon/s: Paladin claws, elemental Holy.
Armor: Mythril in his training suit; absords Fire, Ice and Water.
Magics: Fire, Flare, Barrier, M-Barrier, Haste, Cure.
Special technique/s : Transform = Raises Strenght, Vitality, Magic, Spirit and Speed.

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"Hey, that isn't fair." Lorien shouted when he saw this dark clad one absording his Flare to his mysterious eye. Lorien didn't expect that his enemy would do that. Lorien landed back to ground and stared this mysterious man waiting for making move.

And then it happen. Like nowhere his Flare started coming back. "Wow, where you have learn using Fire magic." Lorien taked battle-stand and but he didn't put his hands front to stop spell. He putted his hands on side like he would be crucifix. Flare spell hit to his chest but it didn't make anything to Lorien. It was absorded. "Thanks."

"Is it now my turn?" Lorien said and grined (=grin). He started levitate about three foot above ground. Grass started burning under Lorien's foot. In twenty seconds everything that was under thirty foots away, was burning. Lorien was surrounded fire. "Oh, I love fire...It's so amazing." After saying that, all the fire was extinguished. For a moment from it, Lorien landed.

He was changed. Loriens muscles were grow, hair color have changed from blond to brown, eyes have changed from red to green and for some reason his claws has grow bigger. Lorien glowed heat and light. He make smile and started staring this dark one.

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Your turn and comment or comments and turn...whatever you like...

[Anomaly]

Well, one, absorbed is a good word to use in such circumstances. Two, transformation is actually illigal on this site and viewed as a godmodding technique. I don't agree with this assesment myself, but its something you ought to keep in mind for when you start fighting on your own. You may disqualify yourself if you try using transformation techniques.

You're bio DOES look a lot more competent now and I liked how you absorbed your own magic back into you. I think your armor may be a tad over powered as it eats fire, ice, and water...but then I've got a set that cuts all elements by half, so who am I to talk?

You still don't have any limit techniques, and you haven't actually launched an attack that could trigger mine. As such, I'll continue the training session, but we will now branch out from the linear format into free form battle. All skills and techniques are up for you use. Mix and match them how you like. I'll let you now when we get to the wrapping up stage.

Anyways...ready?

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The light from the flames danced in the blacks of the Anomlaists eye. More so, the light of the flames is swallowed up by the Holy Shadow, where it goes to feed into the dark clad ones reserves of power. A wicked smile plays over Anomaly's face.

"If you think that was unfair flame mage, then I have a feeling your absolutely going to HATE this."

He makes a gesture, as though he sought ot tear the air apart with his clawed hands. Indeed, some distance between himself and his opponent, a rip forms in the air. A starry void expands, misty around its edges, as the X-Zone begins to suck in mud and earth. It is not a gravity spell, so much as a dimensional vortex that swallows matter. If the flames had not already died, they would've now from the very oxygen being leeched out of the air.

The spell continues moving forward, as though to catch Lorien in its pitch black maw and swallow him whole.

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[Testbug]

Long time without posting. Sorry for making you waiting. But anyway, I have try to think how to dodge your X-Zone and finally I found out how. I have also try to be active with personal live and on other threads so I haven't think this all the time but anyway. Back to topic.

I have improve my character.

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Name: Lorien Silvara

Age: ???

Race: Human/Angel

Class: Master/Dragoon

Elemental: Fire/Holy

Appearnce: He is wearing navy-blue training suit that has has navy-blue cape. He has red eyes burning with rage. He has mid-long brown hair that is on pony-tail. He is about six feet tall. He has also scars on his face for earlier battles.

Personality: Lorien had lost his family when he was young. He promised that he will revenge his familys fate and kill everybody that tries to stop him. Lorien will not fight if he doesn't have really good reason. He will defend weaker than he if he needs to but he won't battle without good reason.

Weapon/s: Paladin claws, elemantal Holy. Paladin claws are gift for his family. Only thing that his family left for him before dieing. They got their holy power from his family that he didn't even know about. His mother come from family that are angels. He met his mother's sister that give he to holy power to add anything.

Armor: Mythril suit, absord Fire, Ice and Water. Because Lorien had life only with he's father and mom in the mountains, he had learn to use power of nature. He had made everykind of stuff from anykind of metal. One day he was travelling on the mountains again and he saw something clittering on the cave. He walked to cave and found mythril. Magical metal that has great durability and it is light. He add that to his training suit and start using it.

Magics: Fire, Flare, Holy, Barrier, M-Barrier, Haste, Cure,

Special technique/s : Transform = Raises Strenght, Vitality, Magic, Spirit and Speed ; Fire Heal = burns bleeding wounds that those wouldn't bleed ;
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I know that grammar still sucks but school started so I try to improve it better in there. And after all, there is people that has worser grammar than I have.

But yep, actual battle. I'm not going to use any special technique because I don't make out any technique that could hurt enemy.
But yeah, to the battle.

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Black hole in the air started suck Lorien inside. "Must...get...away." Lorien mumbled. Then he find out how. "It...has...to...have some...limit."

Lorien turned started trying to run away from this hole. Because he was still under Haste spell and after his transfomation his speed was improved he got enought speed to run far enought to use trick that he think that would work. Lorien still felt how this hole sucked air and land indise even Lorien even didn't be next to it. "Yes, fire doesn't work without oxygen but who said that I can use only fire magic."

Lorien started gather energy around him. He started shudder from energy that gather to his body. "You know that everything has limit." he shouted because of distance. "So eat this you ****ing hole!" "HOLY!".

From Lorien's hand left energy ray that had 7 foot diameter and had Holy power in it. Ray was heading straigh to inside of the hole. "Idea of this trick is overload your hole." Because it has to have some limit." Lorien saw how hole started glow white light from insdie of it. "Like I said, overloading." And hole disappered. But his ray didn't. It was still heading straight to his enemy.

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[Anomaly]

Right, before we continue, I need to point out while its fine to cancel out someone elses spell with something logical, you first need to understand the logic behind the other persons spell. The X-zone spell does have a limited duration, however that duration is more to do with how long the tear in space time is to remain open. The 'hole' cannot be filled in the normal sense of the word as the X-Zone opens into the void of space. Your Holy beam would have about the same effect on it as a flash light.

Now logically speaking it would be entirely possible to dodge as its moving along a straight line. You could even attempt to block it up with something rather larger than the rip, such as a boulder. But 'filling it up' no...

If you wish to edit your post, you may. I'm going to take my time formulating the next sequence of the training.