DoC Battle ~ Let the games begin!! - Page 2

King Fenii · 12-17-2005, 06:49 PM

<~ OOC: First of all, watch your grammar a bit Finally you guys seem to get the hang of it. Not completely though, but you're working your way there. Quick recap: Light Stride throws his dagger at Randell, which he freezes in mid-air and the dagger drops to the ground.

Please note that Light Stride is now unarmed and there is a bolt heading his way...~>

Simply"Kit" · 12-17-2005, 11:28 PM

Hey havent you guys been rading my pos above?hehe guess caught you both by surprise...look again

*Light Stride "hah!I anticipated him to defend himself...the dagger light stride threw froze in the ground but Randell didnt notice what Light Stride did before he threw his dagger,he attached the dagger to his un buckled belt...

*As the thunder bolt was approaching he pulled his belt along with a block of ice, the dagger was frozen inside...so he whiped his belt and making it into an ice mace and smashed the block of ice against the thunder bolt!

*BOOM!!! the block of ice was oblitirated by the thunder bolt and the frozen dagger was free!"Hah! nows my chance...As I remember mages have a time to cast their spells...Light Stride dashed and rolled down to pick up his dagger and saw an oppurtunity...

*Light Stride "red mage has used two spells and is now low on MP!After the crash between the block of ice and the thunder bolt,shards of crystals were on the field....With great speed Light Stride rushed behind red mage and again whiped his dagger attached to his belt...WHISK!!!!

edit by LC:
Kit, this is hopefully the last post of yours from which I'll have to remove a signature. Any more, and you will be warned. Yes, believe it or not, you can get warnings for it. It is, after all, a rule of the RPB forum, and I expect it to be followed.

King Fenii · 12-18-2005, 04:20 AM

<~ OOC: I like the way you did the move with the belt buckle and it's also true the Red Mage can be low on MP, but watch out with that. His MP isn't depleted you know. And do something about your descriptions, I understand them, but not quite. They're vaguely put together and difficult for the reader to follow.

AND PLEASE, TURN OFF THE SIGNATURES!! IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW, GO TO -> HERE <-

Okay Red Mage, the Thief just threw his dagger at you again, that is atached to his belt. Remember you have seen this before. And because you are low on MP, I would advise you to attack with your sword. You MAY use Magic, but it's totally up to you. ~>

RedMagician · 12-18-2005, 04:58 AM

(((OOC~~Let's see. My english isn't the best thing in me. I try to understand the situation ~~OOC)))

"What is that?" Randell thought, when he saw something flying towards him.
"Oh my God! Could it be...Oh yes it is!!" Randell mumbled. Again Randell had to do something. He first thought about casting a spell, but then he realized the amount of his MP. "Oh my. This could be ugly" Randell thought.

He started to run towards the Dagger. But the speed of it was incredible. Right before the dagger was about to hit him, he realized how close it is, and pulled out his sword. With a fierce hit he dodged the dagger, and it bounced back to Stride.But now Randell was ready to counter-attack Stride.

He tried to think a wise way to trick Stride. Suddenly he came up with idea. He started to run towards Thief. Same time when he ran, he secretly raised his hat a little bit. When he was near Stride he quickly jumped. In the air he threw his hat straight to Strides head, blocking the sight of him. When he saw that it worked, he landed, swinged his sword and attacked....

King Fenii · 12-18-2005, 05:13 AM

<~ OOC: It seems you two are getting better with each post. Don't cheer too soon though, I still need to see a good reply by Kit. Red Mage pulled off a pretty good attack that is clear to the reader and could be very effective! Now let's see what Kit will do. Remember, in RPB's good moves will likely hit...~>

Simply"Kit" · 12-19-2005, 11:25 PM

*Light Stride" haha nice move...when Randell threw his hat,clearly he was trying to block my line of sight there was no other move to block or to move the hat away...but the clever thief has tricks up on his own sleeve...

*When the hat was about to land on Light Strides head all the thief did was tilted his head downward and...Tada!Perfect fit!The hat landed on thiefs head in correct proportion! "hee hee nice trick but not good enough!"

*Now that the hat trick failed,an attack was delivered by Randell...His sword was swift but Light Stride defended by throwing his dagger again,lowering Randells murderous intent!...but this time the plan was different!

*By the time the dagger hit the sword it tangled and intwined with the blade!Light Stride tugged hard and pulled the steel sword out of Red mages hands!knowing that Randell was now unarmed...Light Stride delivered a devastating round-house kick directly towards Randell's torso!

King Fenii · 12-20-2005, 08:07 AM

<~ OOC: Hmmm...I think that if RedMage didn't bounce your dagger back to you, this move would've ended up differently. Kit knew how to use the Thiefs skills to his advantage. Instead of taking a hit, he countered excellently. This could turn in to a rather smashing battle!! Okay, RedMage, your turn!! ~>

RedMagician · 12-21-2005, 11:30 PM

OOC~~OMG!!He kicked me. Let's see what I can do...~~OOC

As Kit kicked Randell, he knew that it might be his end. When the kick was delivered, Randell fell down unconscious. But he didn't lose his skill to think. Everything was black. But still he came up with an idea.

Randell jumped up, but almost collapsed again. "I better take careful" he thought. As he saw that Light Stride had his hat, Randell got angry and prepared to attack. But then he realised that he didn't have a sword. Randell saw the sword in the ground and picked it up. Now that he was armed again, he started to run towards Light Stride.

It was time for another trick. Using the same method he used with his hat, he started to detach his tunic. When near Light Stride he threw his tunic towards Light Stride. But he missed. Quickly he jumped and catched his hat from Stride.

Now he saw something very interesting. The bandana in Thiefs head was very easy to catch. He jumped and ran towards Stride. With luck, he catched the bandana. Randell broke it with his sword and tied it into his sword. With all the strenght he got he threw it towards Stride and followed it with a devastating punch...

Simply"Kit" · 12-25-2005, 09:30 PM

***Ehem...Excuse me Red mage,I had your sword in my hand not on the floor...
Sooo please make another move ok ....

*Heres the situation recall, Randell was on the floor after Light Strides Kick...and then...

King Fenii · 12-30-2005, 08:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Simply"Kit"

*By the time the dagger hit the sword it tangled and intwined with the blade!Light Stride tugged hard and pulled the steel sword out of Red mages hands!knowing that Randell was now unarmed...Light Stride delivered a devastating round-house kick directly towards Randell's torso!

<~ OOC: You should've been more clear with this move and stated that Stride took the sword from Randells hands into his own. What I thought when I read this, was that it fell on the floor leaving him unarmed.

Saying this, it's your own small mistake not being clear on this. So, to put it simply, RedMage's turn still stands and YOU should react to his final post.

This is what I meant with being clear in your posts for the readers. Your opponents are readers as well, you know

So, YOUR turn Kit!! ~>

Simply"Kit" · 01-06-2006, 01:01 AM

Ok ok...my bad my bad Lets just have fun Alrighty Red mage!hey guys I have a surprise after this battle is over ok...but for now....[b]...hey Red mage dont copy my moves!

hee hee...you tricky you....heee heee[/ ...Ummm Red mage could you please make your text bigger next time,Im finding it hard to read small words ok!PEACE!

Light Stride= What! my Bandana!I didnt realize he would go for my bandana?Now things are mixed up...He has my bandana and Ive got his Hat!?

An attack was being delivered by Red mage!a move I made earlier was copied by Red mage,he used my bandana to propell his sword towards me!

Knowing that the sword was heavier than the dagger,the sword was not fast enough to hit me!Light Stride shifted his body to the right and caught the sword sideways!

Haha! now I have......but before Light Stride could brag about his move...Huh!there was no time to react and all that Light Stride saw was a fist heading towards his face!

Poow!!!Uhhh....the punch sent Light Stride to the ground rolling and immobilized,dust coverd his whole body
and all we could hear were groans of pain...Owww...Light Stride slowly stood up and said "that was a good move...luckily I held both of my hands tight"! he moved his face and spitted blood on the ground...

Now Light Stride is Equiped with the Steel sword Red mage threw and with his own dagger...with eyes sharper than a hawks stare,finally Light Stride was determined to be serious with the battle...

Light Stride posed with an unusual stance.Firmly holding the Steel sword in the right hand and shifting the dagger into a stabbing position on the left.....

SWooosh!!!with great speed Light Stride dashed towards Red mage...coverd with dust,the path Light Stride made clouded the direction of his attack,he shook off the dirt while running around Red mage,forming a circle of dust,Red mage was confussed and uncertain of Light Stride's location....

Without notice Light Stride attacked in front of Red mage with a very deadly sword dance...The sword dance of two swords!A magnificent skill of deadly percission!Swoosh!Slash!Swing!...with out any defense what so ever this was a move not easily parryied!

King Fenii · 01-06-2006, 03:26 AM

<~ OOC: Wow, Kit, you're getting the hang of this. I like the way you've done it. I'm just a little concerned how you're gonna make it more easy for the reader to read. The creativity is good, and I like the funny way of writing. There are just some things that can be left out. Like the strange sound effects, for instance. Try to work on the care of your writing and I think you'll be just fine.

As for RedMage: Good luck on this one. Use anything that can help you. Be creative and think... ~>

RedMagician · 01-14-2006, 12:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Simply "Kit"

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Light Stride= What! my Bandana!I didnt realize he would go for my bandana?Now things are mixed up...He has my bandana and Ive got his Hat!

((OOC~~Actually.. you don't have my hat. I got it back in my last post remember. Well, don't worry. I will have my hat in this post.~~OOC))

Randell was surprised of the Thief's attack. It was a manouever that could easily hurt Randell deadly. He started to think whilst trying to jump safe from Thief's attacks.

He started to remember what has already happened in the battle. He had to do something that could make the speed of Thief a good thing for him. Now he was ready to catch his sword from Stride...

As Stride was trying to hit Randell, he quickly took his boot off and threw a boot straight to Thief's face. Now he ran to get the sword back. But just when he was near Stride he collapsed. But with luck, that isn't Randell's good friend, he managed to grab the sword from Stride and made a painful crash when he hit the ground. But the plan was a success. Now he had to only trick Stride and he knew just the way...

When Randell was a child, he was a master at tricks, so that helped him a lot.

He crawled back to get his boot from the ground, put it back to his foot and started to ran towards Stride. He knew that what he was about to do next could backfire at him, but he still wanted to try.

He now that Stride could get very angry of this attack, but it could easily lower the morale of Thief. When Randell was near Stride he jumped a sommersault and landed behind Thief. Now was the time. He took Thief's hair to his hands and cut them off with sword.

Now Randell knew that this could get ugly and ran away from Stride, laughing and holding Thief's hair. But he knew that Stride will get a revenge....

Simply"Kit" · 01-20-2006, 12:21 AM

(Ummm why cut my hair??? oh well lets continue)

*Light Stride with a face hardened by anger,stared at his opponent,he could not imagine that Red mage has escaped from hi