My Lulu fan art sketch ^^

[Livana]

I had exactly one hour to do this, wasn't allowed to use a rubber, thought id challenge myself.

Its pretty crap, and I'm not happy with it =/ drew it with no picture or anything to copy from either.

[Tiki]

It looks good, my suggestions (I am a big art person)
Work on the face, have it have a Lulu touch. It is kind of. . . I don't know. I suggest you just fix the face, otherwise, the body is fanastic and the hair!!

[Livana]

Thanks, i tried it two more times...here

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32298025/ Third go
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31813316/ Second go

I REALLY hate my second shot at this.

[VIVI17]

they could use a little work next time i would use a pic to copy from

[Tiki]

Hey. I'm here again!
Okay, well, the face is still, it has something wrong... I think it's the nose. The eyes are too slanted... make the top lip of the mouth a little bigger in the middle.
(Sorry, really am, if I'm bothering you)
Becuause your drawings are really a piece of work! Your great at drawing bodies.

[Livana]

Heh, no its fine! Thanks, I know, I try and try and try but never can seem to get the face how I want it. Its really...I dunno. I just can't do faces. =/ Thanks for your comments.

[Simply"Kit"]

*Oh nice work...its not bad if you say you didnt use erasers and didnt copy from anything.practice more to inprove ok! draw more,improve more and post more right!YEAH!

***HALLER BACK!!!***

[Livana]

Thanks alot. I intend on having more tries etc, on different stuff.

I think it looks good for a beginner. Needs more detail an persiscion, but other than that it is cool . A good pose, and I like the look <smokey>. You did a good job. I like it alot

[Livana]

All three? I think my third attempt was best because I shaded it in. I just can NEVER get faces right even though I spent half a year at school, and another half a year out of school practicing proportions and stuff.

[The Welsh Paddy]

Faces are a right pain to draw. I always have to have some sort of reference when drawing faces, whether it's a picture, or a person sat next to me or something. I won't comment on the first two attempts, but the third attempt. It's not entirely bad. I've seen worse, but I've seen much better too. It looks fine from the shoulders down. The head is too out of proportion compared to the rest of the body, and the positioning and shape of the neck and shoulder is waaay off. If you wanna do fan art, I suggest you take reference from other images. Work more on getting the head, neck and shoulders looking right and your drawings will look far more better.

ya work is top-notch! without a rubber is like suicide xP
for an artist.. i always rub out. But i guess u have skill and alot of it!
well done hun!

[Gobble Vamp]

really great!! the body's excellent...you have real talent! i liked the second one best