Some Poetry from me

Well I thought i'd post some of my poetry and get it commented on well here goes

My Nightmare

It happens when I lay down to sleep
Not during the day
I wish my sanity I could keep
I don’t know what to say
It scares me the most
When I think that I’m the host
To all of these evil things
My mind runs in rings
Its like my soul is screaming
To me it is a scare
When I awake I am steaming
It was only a Nightmare

The Plunge

I stand at the edge of the cliff and say
"I know I shouldn't delay"
I don't know what's at the bottom for me
But for a reason unknown, it I must see
The mist rolls away and my eyesight returns
The sun comes out and my eye burns
I grow acustom to the heat and look to the place
Between me and the unknown is to much space
I get frustrated at my blindness and lunge
Unknowingly I just took the plunge

The Cold of Night

My fear is the worst in the cold of night
Its at that time, the highpoint of my fright
This freezing enhances the fear
only one way to describe this is unclear
I hope warmth will destroy the timidity
And with it take the hindering stupidity
I wrap myself tight in my own naked arms
If only they could also protect me from all harms
The cold coupled with the pain is overbaring
If death would take the feeling, I'd do it without caring



Well there are a couple. Tell me what you think people, give me some C+C