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01-29-2006, 02:42 AM
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STAIRWELL TO HELL
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the poem: dog to master
this is poem made by me but i would like your thoughts on it.
Dog to owner Well, owner, I’ll tell you Life for me has not been a good home It’s had dog pounds in it And cages And bitches in there Uneasy But all the time I have been hanging in there And jumpin’ around And trying to escape Where there haven’t anything but darkness So, owner don’t back down I am still livin’ woof I am still jumpin’ And life for me has not been a good home
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01-29-2006, 02:58 AM
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Dude, there's no reason for two of the same thread. You need to learn some patience, or you're going to start getting some warnings. This isn't the most active forum on the internet, you know.
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