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Okay, this one was very close. I'm giving this to Malevolence.
I wish there were more to judge, because basically, here's my thoughts: you both were good, but not so good that I was blown away. I just felt that overall, Mal's post was of slightly better quality. There was really very little I could say in the area of improvement for both of you--both of your posts were very solid, it just turned out that Mal's were slightly better.
Well done both of you, and best of luck in the next round.
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