[Storm]

You have the outlines anproportions really well. You seem to be a good line artist, which is something some people dont consider to be art. The shading is good, but maybe try to enhance the shading, perhaps practicing a few techniques such as cross-hatching. I think some of your work would look great with a green or red ink wash with biro outlining the actual image. With your drawings being of things like a flower or a plant, it really would look nice trying out some ink-washes.

Keep it up.