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I do, first of off no flaming ^_^
Second of all nice poem Tifa! A word of advise though, while reading the poem, it seemed to *ME* that you TRIED to rhyme in your wording. You shouldn't do that, the best poems are not the ones which rhyme, but those which have a deeper meaning that that which is presented.
But if you were not trying to rhyme good job and keep at it!
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