I am willing to critique people's work if they like. Just keep this in mind: I stomp mud-holes in bad grammar and cliches.
One thing I was wondering is why nobody simply comments inside the individual threads? That is one reason this forum seems rather dead, since people are too afraid to comment or something. I know a lot of folks read the stuff, but nobody ever says anything. Do you just not wish people to post in there or what? There is no rule about it, so I was just curious. I suppose it would make it harder to sift out the "story" posts from the rest if a ton of people commented, but I don't think it'd be that bad. Either that, or there should be OOC threads. Just my thoughts on the matter.