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Old 10-27-2005, 03:27 PM Level: 17   HP: 20 / 424
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Well since they are downsized I cant realy tell alot about whats going on.

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Very nice design with the flow, since its downsized I cant tell what the words say. The picture is of realy good quality and looks well with the background, i would suggest putter the stock to the right side instead of left then give her a fade out on her hair to the background.

2nd. Very nice design again, and againI cant tell what the words say. Almost everything is placed perfectly except the stock at the top right, I cant realy make out what it is but it doesnt seem to look right there.

3rd. Advent Children? nice, but sme of the pictures of obscured by the Aerith picture and the FINALFANTASYVII text above and below it.i suggest getting rid of that bit of blend it in a little bit.

Other wise, apart from the downsized a few things i picked out, these are realy good. I hope to see some more of your work and some more improvements. Keep at it.
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