[LocoColt04]

Much like the Malevolence - ultima_trev fight, this too only has one battle post. Since introductory posts don't count for anything in tournaments, that REALLY hurts you, Mugetsu. Unless Winter godmods, expect a loss here.

A breakdown, because you should get one anyway:


post001 - Winter

Brilliant, actually researching your opponent before the fight begins, and using that information in your introductory post. Since you're not controlling him during the fight itself here, it's perfectly legitimate, not to mention cool. Unlike some of the other participants, you grasped the idea of virtual reality and holodecks the way it was put together in my mind, and you put it to paper (or, well, screen) in a very well-written way. Excellent setup of both the real world and your environment of choice here.


post002 - Mugetsu

Man, what happened? This was your only post. But it was quite the amazing post. Your entrance into the environment created by Winter is emphatic and dramatic. You enter, and you make a point when you do. There's a bit of confusion in the misinterpretation of the setting, but nothing too drastic. I would've liked to see a bit more action on your part when you close off your introduction, but with him hiding, I can see why you didn't waste time searching. Shame there couldn't have been a followup post, though. This could've been a good one.


post003 - Winter

There's one glaring problem with your post -- where you aim at the end. If you'd notice, Icarus' wings have burned off completely, and in their place exist eight tentacles. Technically, based upon your post, you're aiming at nothing. Aside from that, it was beautifully written. I do have to wonder, however, if this is part of what kept Mugetsu from replying... nevertheless, since you never really had any competition here, the victory goes to you.



Victor: Winter