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hey everybody! ^_^
ok, so far everything is good basically right?
Questions answered: Tsiiiri- (Umm…what year is this taking place anyway?)
Well, I haven't set that in stone or anything, especially since this is on a different land copmletely, but lets see....i don't want it to be too advanced...so we can say about 1800's? how's that w/ you all?
And so far that's two for Western only, and I almost really agree w/ you totally. I'm thinking about just changing my first post completely. Make it shorter ^_^
Okay, on Tsi's Chara
i really like your chara. The strong silent type eh? I really wasn't sure how it tied in with morals until the last sentence, but you made it all come around so, *bum bum bum* I give you the part!! SQUEEE!!
on Heaven's Coins
i really like your chara too. She seems energetic and fun loving, however cynical at the same time. You put lots of detail into everything, which is exactly what I asked for, however, you have a lot of just grammatical mistakes that made me twitch all through here. like in your first sentence, "serafina has no family in which she can speak of, she born in lab"
.................................... no...*thumps nose* "serafina has no family OF which she can speak of, she WAS born in A lab." The only way i could let some of this slide, is if your chara was a cave man, and since she's so cute and adorable (squee!!) no.
anyways, I promise you, my chara. will be up soon, i'm working out some things with her, so be patient!! I love yous guys!!
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